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The puffs of air came and went bubbling Happily putting on the exhaust on high Running like hell to the outhouse saying bye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/22/2015 2:07:00 PM
I've read a few of your writes Tony, and you are a great writer my friend, so keep coming with it, oh and thanks for the comment on my write, God bless LB
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Date: 4/22/2015 2:26:00 PM
Thanks Louis,these are okay but some of them I write I have a heavy heart and those are the ones that I really love to write,I think you know what I mean,anyway peace n blessings..Tocaa
Date: 4/11/2015 4:08:00 PM
Tony, loved it...I've been to a working farm hostel and the outhouse was waiting to become the ignition source for the next big bang theory.
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Date: 4/11/2015 5:06:00 PM
Funny Gil,the odor still lingers lol,thanks my man...tonytocaa
Date: 4/9/2015 3:13:00 AM
This is so clever, I enjoyed!
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Date: 4/9/2015 6:39:00 AM
Njeri,thank you for enjoying and your Positive feedback always TonyTocaa
Date: 4/8/2015 5:27:00 AM
This is great friend.. love your work.
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:36:00 AM
MQ,thank you , much success in your writing which I enjoy..TonyTocaa