Tonytocaa Camacho Poet Haiku

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Out House Saga

The puffs of air came and went bubbling
                         Happily putting on the exhaust on high
                                       Running like hell to the outhouse saying bye

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Louis Brown April 22, 2015 at 2:07 PM I've read a few of your writes Tony, and you are a great writer my friend, so keep coming with it, oh and thanks for the comment on my write, God bless LB Tonytocaa Camacho April 22, 2015 at 2:26 PM Thanks Louis,these are okay but some of them I write I have a heavy heart and those are the ones that I really love to write,I think you know what I mean,anyway peace n blessings..Tocaa

Gil Garcia April 11, 2015 at 4:08 PM Tony, loved it...I've been to a working farm hostel and the outhouse was waiting to become the ignition source for the next big bang theory. Tonytocaa Camacho April 11, 2015 at 5:06 PM Funny Gil,the odor still lingers lol,thanks my man...tonytocaa

Njeri Hunjeri April 9, 2015 at 3:13 AM This is so clever, I enjoyed! Tonytocaa Camacho April 9, 2015 at 6:39 AM Njeri,thank you for enjoying and your Positive feedback always TonyTocaa

Michael Quinn April 8, 2015 at 5:27 AM This is great friend.. love your work. Tonytocaa Camacho April 8, 2015 at 7:36 AM MQ,thank you , much success in your writing which I enjoy..TonyTocaa