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OUT COLD

This bear’s out cold - he has a bug. I breathe into snout then I shrug. I lay on his back. No chance of attack. No way to awaken this rug. 1/12/2022

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Date: 1/13/2022 3:22:00 AM
Cute one. You are on a Limerick roll. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 1/13/2022 1:07:00 AM
Great final twist. Did I notice some movement in the bear :) Hugs.
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Date: 1/12/2022 6:01:00 PM
Ha, ha! Last line got me but good. Great stuff, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 6:19:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon!
Date: 1/12/2022 3:06:00 PM
Hello! Kim, This was adorable. This is one bear you won't have to  run from. LoL Well-written,  Debra.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 6:19:00 PM
LOL!
Date: 1/12/2022 10:48:00 AM
HellomKim, that is for certain. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2022 10:34:00 AM
Hello Kim, Your welcome my friend. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 2:00:00 PM
lol…thanks, Darlene! ~ hugs
Date: 1/12/2022 9:59:00 AM
Clever idea for a limerick, Kim. I enjoyed it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 1:59:00 PM
Thanks, Milton! I got the idea when they had on the news a bear they were trying to help. I thought wouldn’t be funny if it turned out to be a rug. ;)