Out Cold

This bear’s out cold - he has a bug. I breathe into snout then I shrug. I lay on his back. No chance of attack. No way to awaken this rug. 1/12/2022

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/13/2022 3:22:00 AM

Cute one. You are on a Limerick roll. Way to go. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2022 1:07:00 AM

Great final twist. Did I notice some movement in the bear :) Hugs.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2022 6:01:00 PM

Ha, ha! Last line got me but good. Great stuff, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 6:19:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon!

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/12/2022 3:06:00 PM

Hello! Kim, This was adorable. This is one bear you won't have to run from. LoL Well-written, Debra.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 6:19:00 PM

LOL!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2022 10:48:00 AM

HellomKim, that is for certain. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2022 10:34:00 AM

Hello Kim, Your welcome my friend. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 2:00:00 PM

lol…thanks, Darlene! ~ hugs

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/12/2022 9:59:00 AM

Clever idea for a limerick, Kim. I enjoyed it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 1:59:00 PM

Thanks, Milton! I got the idea when they had on the news a bear they were trying to help. I thought wouldn’t be funny if it turned out to be a rug. ;)