Out Cold

This bear’s out cold - he has a bug. I breathe into snout then I shrug. I lay on his back. No chance of attack. No way to awaken this rug. 1/12/2022
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Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 3:22 AM
Cute one. You are on a Limerick roll. Way to go. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:07 AM
Great final twist. Did I notice some movement in the bear :) Hugs.
Wolf Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Ha, ha! Last line got me but good. Great stuff, Kim! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:19 PM
Thanks, Gershon!
Brown Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:06 PM
Hello! Kim, This was adorable. This is one bear you won't have to  run from. LoL Well-written,  Debra.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 6:19 PM
LOL!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 10:48 AM
HellomKim, that is for certain. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Hello Kim, Your welcome my friend. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 2:00 PM
lol…thanks, Darlene! ~ hugs
Hankins Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Clever idea for a limerick, Kim. I enjoyed it.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 1:59 PM
Thanks, Milton! I got the idea when they had on the news a bear they were trying to help. I thought wouldn’t be funny if it turned out to be a rug. ;)
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