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Out Cast

. …Yes sweet Carol Brown
the out cast drives himself away...
never a thought for another way...
selfishness hast cast the rod ..
suggesting he is more than god...
come uppance he must pay...
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Lovely verse sweet Caroline...
constant fire insatiable time...
yes we seem to come together...
with  our choices very clever
word of mouth tapped on the puter
minds do link subconcious tutorl
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yes we write on the same line of thought
but the teasng comes to naught
but no one is hurt  want no one hurting
but all good fun only flirting...
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We like to tease entertainingly 
to bring an honest smile
to tantalize just only ye
and love it all the while
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in Aussie we have a flathead catfish
 inland streams paralysis ticks screw in it seems    (we use 2 five cent pieces to screw
the head out)
afte r floods mosquitos millions 
and sandfly mites millions billions 
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Dear Hitendra better out
 then kept right in,
 opinion held it is no sin,
 im no expert on the block 
if my verse gets worse 
i'll wear a frock
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Any bodies summer my sweet
cos when we meet
the spark will flow
tween toe and toe 
consuming heat

just comments …Don

to be at one with nature
the butterfly flaps by
the grass so verdant green
itself is such an high

.........................
Dr Ram
getting older timeless winters..
surveying tracks you have made...
checking for the older splinters....
good and bad are on parade :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 7:02:00 AM
Thank you for the honor of being included in your poetry with the other outstanding poets whom you wrote of Don. I do enjoy reading your poetry and hope to see you here writing for many years to come. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:59:00 PM
Oh, thanks for the honor. First time I ever see my name in a poem! :) Well done for each of the writers you wrote about. Flirting?
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Date: 5/17/2011 6:04:00 PM
interesting piece Don, much enjoyed
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:47:00 PM
Interesting work honor Caroline and Carol..Thanks for stopping by and understanding my loss..I am still feeling sad..Sara
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