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OUR WORLDS COLLIDE

I would love to be your comfort A blanket when you're confused A bright song on every dark day Warmth and hope you cannot lose To be the canopy to cover you When life's storms come your way I can be the one you've longed for Because I see the words you can't say So let's discard the old frayed sweater That doesn't fit, it's come undone You don't need words for my attention Let's just hold hands and have some fun Your eyes could light the skies tonight That coy smile, wow.. it melts my heart My guitar plays you sweet love songs This is our time when true love starts Girl, drift off to sleep on my shoulder This guy pillow.. yeah, made for you It's so euphoric to feel your heart beat And know your dreams are coming true Being with you I'm filled with wonder A kiss goodnight, no shadows to hide In the morning, I'll be your first sight This is how it is when our worlds collide ~Lyric Man Note: This is a soft love song echo to Casarah Nance write, "If You Knew" There's something so incredibly amazing about a love based on commitment to do and be all you can for your partner.

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Date: 12/26/2019 10:26:00 AM
I remember this poem Lyric man. Congrats on placing in the top 100.
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Date: 7/28/2019 6:17:00 PM
very nice, very lyrical and warm and not too much! impressive
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Date: 2/23/2019 5:39:00 PM
Hello Lyric man, you can sing this song to the one you love. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:19:00 PM
Enjoyed your beautiful song, Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/8/2018 10:11:00 PM
It is so great to love some one so much that you can express it so well in this love song poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/22/2018 11:54:00 PM
Such a sweet love song, Lyric Man....
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:51:00 AM
This is my favorite poem of yours so far. This poem is so sweet!
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Date: 7/24/2018 3:19:00 PM
Good poem Lyric man.
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Date: 7/20/2018 9:51:00 AM
My good friend, huge congrats on this lyrical gem being chosen to be POTW! A well very deserved choice.... A FAV....
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Date: 7/8/2018 3:12:00 PM
hi there really nice to read your words this is an age old theme and one off the best, your words meld together very well no critique needed read and enjoyed
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:18:00 AM
Yay! Back with POTW congratulations! :)) xomo
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Date: 7/8/2018 6:42:00 AM
Wow wow wow! Powerful words, full of emotions and realistically driven. I enjoy the meaning and you are a real great writer ??
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Date: 7/7/2018 10:20:00 PM
Hello LM, Congratulations of the POTW honor here!! This is most excellent for sure. Your poem here virtually transports the reader right into the very romantic molecular structure and passion personified by the three stanzas of your lyric masterpiece. Very enjoyable to read and to think about. A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 7/7/2018 4:22:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem it's the romance we all dream of
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Date: 7/6/2018 11:28:00 AM
Lyric Man, your beautiful lyric has enraptured me with its tender emotional imagery of a deep and complete love. My swooning heart melts in the passionate golden glow of your breathtaking poetry. Congratulations on your well deserved POTW honors. Warmest wishes my romantic friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/6/2018 7:11:00 AM
I REALLY THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL FEEDBACK AND I FEEL ITS FITTING FOR ME DO THE SAME. HONESTLY SPEAKING I LOVE THIS PIECE, THE MESSAGE BEHIND YOUR WORDS HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DEPTH AND MEANING. A BEAUTIFUL POEM AND ITS REALLY WONDERFUL TO SEE THAT THERE ARE MORE PEOPLE WHO LOVE WHAT THEY DO AS MUCH AS I DO
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Date: 7/5/2018 7:23:00 PM
Your creativity is so breathtaking, Lyric Man.. I'm in awe reading this and with pleasure. Absolutely beautiful lyrics!! Imagery is excellent.. Blessings!
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Date: 7/5/2018 6:12:00 PM
This is so sweet and gentle as a dedication to love should be.It is really lovely,to use one of your words reading it creates a feeling of euphoria.Thank you.
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Date: 7/5/2018 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTW Lyric Man, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 7/5/2018 11:27:00 AM
are you young , or old like me 63
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:51:00 AM
You found a way to write a song in poetry where the words combine to make music... Nice love write... Congrats on your potw
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your potw! Should be set to music! Nice to see you back writing again :)
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:12:00 AM
There's some great imagery here Lyric Man. I particularly liked the opening lines. It's a beautiful song.
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:03:00 AM
Wonderful. Smiles. Congrats on potw! xomo
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Date: 7/3/2018 5:09:00 AM
Ohhh, this so touched my heart
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