Our World/I Wonder (Poem Version)

Seven things that are taking over our world
Unprotected Sex, Drugs, Deception, Unhappiness, Greed, Low Self-Esteem, and no love for 
self
Problems that seem consistent to the average man
Maybe it's time for a new light
With this new ability to see
We will all undergo a change of mind
A creation of self-empowerment
The right to change the seemingly unchageable
Bright and everlasting this light will be
Filled with love for self and true passion
The will to speak and speak out loud
Stand up for what's right
We have been decieved
Ripped and torn away from our goal in life
Eternal happiness, Lastiong love, and Personal Satisfaction
Feel the rushing rage of honor
With this
I will not ponder
Who's responsibility is it to start a new and imrpoved world for the up-and-coming generation
Looking in the mirror
I Wonder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 1:12 PM
again excellent write---Charma
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Romeo. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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September 5, 2009 at 5:03 PM
"We will all undergo a change of mind" love this line...Raul
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September 5, 2009 at 5:03 PM
All of America needs to question self. Nicely written questions and thoughts. Sara
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