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Let me be clear,in this poem,i do not  put the blame for my own failures,on other people.

 In this chaotic , crazy world  in which  we live
everyone is often subjected to unpleasant feeling.
Unfortunately ,  we live in the new world order,
in which  the machine is the predominant
factor , which defines  every activity
of our life.
Sooner than later, human will be utterly 
enslaved by the machine.
It is tremendously tough times for those
creators that belong to minority 
because of the stereotypes which prevail
in our society.
So, on thing is clear to me, everyone 
 who  is a creator of Art
should be only subjugated to God...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/15/2024 3:31:00 PM
Hello Mulu, I am also hoping for better days to come. blessings my friend./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2024 10:10:00 AM
hello Mulu, You are welcome. Blewssinfgs my frienbd. /Darlene/
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 10/15/2024 8:47:00 PM
Hello Darlene. thank you . Blessings my friend
Date: 10/15/2024 10:27:00 AM
True its tough times, for so many in the world of creativity, and you’ve expressed very well here. One that many can resonate with. I keep still hoping for better days! Sending you light always! Pleasure reading you today! Ill come back to read more of your work
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 10/15/2024 8:49:00 PM
Thank you, dear poet. Blessings.
Date: 10/15/2024 7:02:00 AM
Isn’t it funny how mankind creates its own demise, as we try to make things easier, get greedier, and pander lies? I lean on God.
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 10/15/2024 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Kim. Blessings
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