L Milton Hankins Poet Monorhyme

Our Vet

I expect
no respect
for the vet
from my pet,
I regret
as of yet
I’ve not met
Dr. Yvette.

Nice enough,
she’s tough
a bit rough
on Fluff!

I agree
that her fee
could not be
cause for glee
for Fluff or me.

Written August 26, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger August 28, 2022 at 10:38 PM So sweet! Neat. Cannot be beat. L Milton Hankins August 29, 2022 at 8:05 AM Thanks, Caren. I was just playing around with words, trying to tweak my muse. I'm not sure it worked!

Maurice Rigoler August 27, 2022 at 8:19 PM I can relate to this very easily, Milton. I took by sick dachshund to the vet two weeks ago. His diagnosis was right on. He charged me less than I expected – $84. I too enjoy dabbling with rhymes. / Maurice

Michael Tor August 26, 2022 at 9:44 PM Funny piece Milton enjoyed reading my friend... L Milton Hankins August 27, 2022 at 8:02 AM Thanks, Michael. I was just toying around with the rhymes.

Kim Rodrigues August 26, 2022 at 5:46 PM A lot of double talk! Love it! L Milton Hankins August 26, 2022 at 9:28 PM I was merely playing around with some simple rhymes, but it turned into this poem. I'm glad you read and liked it, Kim.

Heidi Sands August 26, 2022 at 2:34 PM Lol! I understand this and I have a vet visit next week. Well done :) L Milton Hankins August 26, 2022 at 4:46 PM I wrote this in fun, Heidi, and I'm pleased you enjoyed it.