Our Unbelief

Far away as we can be from one another
As if separated by oceans and lands
Contentment resides when no matter
The distance, I believe in you to the end.

Expectations can alter the view
When a deed does not fit
That will affect that precious bond
That connects our souls, causing a shift.

Your disbelief widens the gap
And suddenly you see a distorted picture
That tears your insides apart
And your heart has been hurt.

But when you remember your belief
And you keep reaching out
Because you can't let go, though you grieve
Something unexpected is found out.

As wounded you are, another is hurt too
Your actions have caused grief
To the one you thought had failed you
Stricken by the pain of your unbelief.

Far away as we can be from one another
As if separated by oceans and lands
Contentment resides when no matter
The distance, we believe in each other to the end.

Soon we will be close to one another again
We will understand the gift we have received
Our bond will reach a strength beyond gain
Because our love overcame our unbelief.


By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 03.29.11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 4:21 PM
a creat write, nice poem. thank you for reading Perfect Day.
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April 2, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Very touching poem, love never ends regardless of distance. Hope it works out and thanks for sharing. Much enjoyed.
Lacey Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 12:18 PM
love wins in the end if you don't give up! great poem
Austin Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Aint love grand? I like your comparisons to the dark side of romance, makes good times gooder. Love, dave
La France Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 4:28 PM
This poem is"beautful" very emotional, I really enjoyed reading your words~~
Devonshire Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Have amends been made, Caroline? It sounds like you are offering a second chance. Just protect your heart. I hope you are doing better now. As always, your writing is simply amazing. They say the eyes are windows to the soul, but poetry provides a portal as well. Let me know when you feel like chatting. Sorry to say that "Beseeching Love" was just based on general thoughts, not personal experience. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 4:31 AM
Enjoyed reading this exceptional piece this morning Caroline. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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March 29, 2011 at 9:07 PM
An impressive piece Caroline ..especially touching and deeply tender lines of expression ..especially enjoyed..expectations can alter the view ... and as wounded you are, another is hurt too.. can so relate my friend...making this a new fav for me and u a fav poet tonight luv..
Haick Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Beautiful, heartwarming poem to uplift the spirit, Caroline. Amazing work. Always, Annalise
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