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Our Unbelief

Far away as we can be from one another As if separated by oceans and lands Contentment resides when no matter The distance, I believe in you to the end. Expectations can alter the view When a deed does not fit That will affect that precious bond That connects our souls, causing a shift. Your disbelief widens the gap And suddenly you see a distorted picture That tears your insides apart And your heart has been hurt. But when you remember your belief And you keep reaching out Because you can't let go, though you grieve Something unexpected is found out. As wounded you are, another is hurt too Your actions have caused grief To the one you thought had failed you Stricken by the pain of your unbelief. Far away as we can be from one another As if separated by oceans and lands Contentment resides when no matter The distance, we believe in each other to the end. Soon we will be close to one another again We will understand the gift we have received Our bond will reach a strength beyond gain Because our love overcame our unbelief. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 03.29.11

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Date: 4/16/2011 4:21:00 PM
a creat write, nice poem. thank you for reading Perfect Day.
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:30:00 PM
Very touching poem, love never ends regardless of distance. Hope it works out and thanks for sharing. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 4/1/2011 12:18:00 PM
love wins in the end if you don't give up! great poem
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Date: 3/31/2011 8:36:00 AM
Aint love grand? I like your comparisons to the dark side of romance, makes good times gooder. Love, dave
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Date: 3/30/2011 4:28:00 PM
This poem is"beautful" very emotional, I really enjoyed reading your words~~
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Date: 3/30/2011 10:07:00 AM
Have amends been made, Caroline? It sounds like you are offering a second chance. Just protect your heart. I hope you are doing better now. As always, your writing is simply amazing. They say the eyes are windows to the soul, but poetry provides a portal as well. Let me know when you feel like chatting. Sorry to say that "Beseeching Love" was just based on general thoughts, not personal experience. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2011 4:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this exceptional piece this morning Caroline. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 9:07:00 PM
An impressive piece Caroline ..especially touching and deeply tender lines of expression ..especially enjoyed..expectations can alter the view ... and as wounded you are, another is hurt too.. can so relate my friend...making this a new fav for me and u a fav poet tonight luv..
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Date: 3/29/2011 2:12:00 PM
Beautiful, heartwarming poem to uplift the spirit, Caroline. Amazing work. Always, Annalise
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