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Our Tranquil Place

Where the world is wonderful, white and pristine, meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface terrain once drab and grey. With iridescent sheen the world unfolds before us now in satin grace. How lovely and serene is this – our tranquil place. Jan. 2, 2020 For the Writing Prompt- English Quintain Imagery - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 1/19/2020 8:44:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this dreamy write _ Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2020 2:15:00 PM

- A great winning poem Andrea, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2020 4:14:00 AM

A glorious scene you have painted with your words Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo

Joseph May

Date: 1/10/2020 5:44:00 PM

Dropping back with my Cngrats on your win Andrea..

Lu Loo

Date: 1/10/2020 3:16:00 PM

stunning imagery dear Andrea, so beautiful. Congrats x:-)-luloo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/10/2020 11:57:00 AM

Beautiful. Great write. I wish I had a daily tranquil place. I only have it when I go away.........

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2020 2:58:00 PM

me too, in my go away place of my dreams

Joseph May

Date: 1/4/2020 8:47:00 PM

Very nicely penned Andrea, best wishes

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/3/2020 10:28:00 PM

Hello Andrea … we all need a haven of tranquillity wherever that may be - once again, thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Mike Bayles

Date: 1/3/2020 4:19:00 PM

Very nice, Andrea. I love the language and the rhymes.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/3/2020 1:17:00 PM

Beautiful Andrea! Loved this serene feeling!;)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2020 12:07:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery Andrea, good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2020 9:26:00 AM

That’s what our place looks like this morning. ;0)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/3/2020 8:43:00 AM

The transformation from drab and grey to a place of peaceful beauty is very striking, Andrea. Both imagery and rhyme are delightful. Regards // paul

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/3/2020 5:28:00 AM

Ah!--serenely beautiful! I wish all a special love and tranquil place to share. Happy New Year Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2020 2:56:00 AM

- Lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/2/2020 8:36:00 PM

A beautiful image that I love to see Andrea. Good luck Tom P. S. Soup mail.

John Watt

Date: 1/2/2020 8:19:00 PM

Ah, snow... Makes me want to sit down and watch White Christmas again! Love the word iridescent |^) also the line "meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface". Great write.