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Our Tranquil Place

Where the world is wonderful, white and pristine, meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface terrain once drab and grey. With iridescent sheen the world unfolds before us now in satin grace. How lovely and serene is this – our tranquil place. Jan. 2, 2020 For the Writing Prompt- English Quintain Imagery - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 1/19/2020 8:44:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this dreamy write _ Constance
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Date: 1/14/2020 2:15:00 PM
- A great winning poem Andrea, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/11/2020 4:14:00 AM
A glorious scene you have painted with your words Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
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Date: 1/10/2020 5:44:00 PM
Dropping back with my Cngrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 1/10/2020 3:16:00 PM
stunning imagery dear Andrea, so beautiful. Congrats x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/10/2020 11:57:00 AM
Beautiful. Great write. I wish I had a daily tranquil place. I only have it when I go away.........
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Date: 1/10/2020 2:58:00 PM
me too, in my go away place of my dreams
Date: 1/4/2020 8:47:00 PM
Very nicely penned Andrea, best wishes
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Date: 1/3/2020 10:28:00 PM
Hello Andrea … we all need a haven of tranquillity wherever that may be - once again, thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 1/3/2020 4:19:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea. I love the language and the rhymes.
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Date: 1/3/2020 1:17:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea! Loved this serene feeling!;)
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Date: 1/3/2020 12:07:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Andrea, good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2020 9:26:00 AM
That’s what our place looks like this morning. ;0)
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Date: 1/3/2020 8:43:00 AM
The transformation from drab and grey to a place of peaceful beauty is very striking, Andrea. Both imagery and rhyme are delightful. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/3/2020 5:28:00 AM
Ah!--serenely beautiful! I wish all a special love and tranquil place to share. Happy New Year Andrea!
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Date: 1/3/2020 2:56:00 AM
- Lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2020 8:36:00 PM
A beautiful image that I love to see Andrea. Good luck Tom P. S. Soup mail.
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Date: 1/2/2020 8:19:00 PM
Ah, snow... Makes me want to sit down and watch White Christmas again! Love the word iridescent |^) also the line "meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface". Great write.
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