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Our Tranquil Place

Where the world is wonderful, white and pristine,

meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface

terrain once drab and grey. With iridescent sheen

the world unfolds before us now in satin grace.

How lovely and serene is this – our tranquil place.


Jan. 2, 2020
For the Writing Prompt- English Quintain Imagery - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Constance La France Date: 1/19/2020 8:44:00 AM Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this dreamy write _ Constance Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2020 2:15:00 PM - A great winning poem Andrea, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/11/2020 4:14:00 AM A glorious scene you have painted with your words Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/10/2020 5:44:00 PM Dropping back with my Cngrats on your win Andrea.. Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 1/10/2020 3:16:00 PM stunning imagery dear Andrea, so beautiful. Congrats x:-)-luloo Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/10/2020 11:57:00 AM Beautiful. Great write. I wish I had a daily tranquil place. I only have it when I go away......... Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2020 2:58:00 PM me too, in my go away place of my dreams

Joseph May Date: 1/4/2020 8:47:00 PM Very nicely penned Andrea, best wishes Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 1/3/2020 10:28:00 PM Hello Andrea … we all need a haven of tranquillity wherever that may be - once again, thank you Andrea - Lindsay Login to Reply

Mike Bayles Date: 1/3/2020 4:19:00 PM Very nice, Andrea. I love the language and the rhymes. Login to Reply

Brenda Chiri Date: 1/3/2020 1:17:00 PM Beautiful Andrea! Loved this serene feeling!;) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/3/2020 12:07:00 PM Such beautiful imagery Andrea, good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/3/2020 9:26:00 AM That’s what our place looks like this morning. ;0) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/3/2020 8:43:00 AM The transformation from drab and grey to a place of peaceful beauty is very striking, Andrea. Both imagery and rhyme are delightful. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 1/3/2020 5:28:00 AM Ah!--serenely beautiful! I wish all a special love and tranquil place to share. Happy New Year Andrea! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/3/2020 2:56:00 AM - Lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/2/2020 8:36:00 PM A beautiful image that I love to see Andrea. Good luck Tom P. S. Soup mail. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 1/2/2020 8:19:00 PM Ah, snow... Makes me want to sit down and watch White Christmas again! Love the word iridescent |^) also the line "meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface". Great write. Login to Reply