Andrea Dietrich Poet Quintain (English)

Our Tranquil Place

Where the world is wonderful, white and pristine,

meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface

terrain once drab and grey. With iridescent sheen

the world unfolds before us now in satin grace.

How lovely and serene is this – our tranquil place.


Jan. 2, 2020
For the Writing Prompt- English Quintain Imagery - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Constance La France January 19, 2020 at 8:44 AM Andrea, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this dreamy write _ Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 2:15 PM - A great winning poem Andrea, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise

Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2020 at 4:14 AM A glorious scene you have painted with your words Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo

Joseph May January 10, 2020 at 5:44 PM Dropping back with my Cngrats on your win Andrea..

Beautiful Scars January 10, 2020 at 3:16 PM stunning imagery dear Andrea, so beautiful. Congrats x:-)-luloo

Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2020 at 11:57 AM Beautiful. Great write. I wish I had a daily tranquil place. I only have it when I go away......... Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2020 at 2:58 PM me too, in my go away place of my dreams

Joseph May January 4, 2020 at 8:47 PM Very nicely penned Andrea, best wishes

Lindsay Laurie January 3, 2020 at 10:28 PM Hello Andrea … we all need a haven of tranquillity wherever that may be - once again, thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Mike Bayles January 3, 2020 at 4:19 PM Very nice, Andrea. I love the language and the rhymes.

Brenda Chiri January 3, 2020 at 1:17 PM Beautiful Andrea! Loved this serene feeling!;)

Jan Allison January 3, 2020 at 12:07 PM Such beautiful imagery Andrea, good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 3, 2020 at 9:26 AM That’s what our place looks like this morning. ;0)

Paul Callus January 3, 2020 at 8:43 AM The transformation from drab and grey to a place of peaceful beauty is very striking, Andrea. Both imagery and rhyme are delightful. Regards // paul

Joseph P. DiMino January 3, 2020 at 5:28 AM Ah!--serenely beautiful! I wish all a special love and tranquil place to share. Happy New Year Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2020 at 2:56 AM - Lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham January 2, 2020 at 8:36 PM A beautiful image that I love to see Andrea. Good luck Tom P. S. Soup mail.

John Watt January 2, 2020 at 8:19 PM Ah, snow... Makes me want to sit down and watch White Christmas again! Love the word iridescent |^) also the line "meltable myriads of light crystal flakes efface". Great write.