Our Time

Sponsor Brian Strand Contest Name FOURS AND FIVES single poem of 4 or 5 lines,any form or theme sadness when they early go, and break the string of time n flow, we do our time, the sentence slow, a death attains our freedom, no? Don

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Kim Merryman

Date: 12/13/2011 6:17:00 PM

Congrats on your HM, Don. Kim

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/13/2011 5:02:00 AM

enjoyed this Don :) congratulations!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/13/2011 1:58:00 AM

congratulations Don, quite deep x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2011 9:42:00 PM

This is really nice, Don. congratulations on the winners' circle. LUv, Andrea

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2011 3:06:00 PM

Don congrats on your win, how true..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Don. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2011 11:34:00 AM

Good poen Don,I like it! Anne-Lise (and winter Norway)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2011 11:48:00 AM

I really like this one, Don! It says so much in so few words.

Tony Lane

Date: 12/2/2011 7:16:00 AM

And yet we know that they've just stepped out for a minute.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/1/2011 6:17:00 PM

Oh yeah, there's a huge robbery there, that death creates...a stupendous steal of life! I sure hope he doesn't visit me anytime soon! Great poem all about when it's that time to go, and how death comes no matter how much to try to run away!! Terrific Work!!