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Our Time

It is just another day To be used as we like To choose joy as our companion Or embolden friction and strife It is just another hour To spend as we desire To embrace love as a mentor Or wallow in customized mire It is just another minute To be valued as a prize To caress truth as life’s foreplay Or nestle with deception and lies It is just another year To capture the selfie of all time To magnify the light we’ve been given Or post our demise by design

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Date: 4/22/2025 3:23:00 AM
This poem reads like a quiet wake-up call—a gentle but firm reminder of the choices we carry in every moment. I really loved how each stanza builds on the previous one, showing the power we have to shape our lives through intention. The rhythm and structure made the message land even more deeply. Be Blessed always, Hiba.
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Mary Scott
Date: 4/23/2025 8:28:00 AM
Thank you for your intuitive review of this piece. You grasped the essence of the poem. I appreciate your time.

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