Our Sweet Little Girl Olivia

Our Sweet Little Girl Olivia..... Olivia is our sweet little girl with her charming face She dances like a butterfly and swim like a fish She talks like a parrot and act like a grown woman She laughs with joyful heart and attracts us with her sweet smiles She sleeps like an angel floating in the clouds She is like a candle of the house who keeps everyone in illuminate She is an intelligent little girl with so much enthusiastic with her lessons She is such a brave girl brings love and strength to our house She loves her papa and mama with plenty of kisses shared She fights with her sisters but she love them so much She always plays with her friends and sometime drive them crazy too She is our sweet little girl who keeps us happy with her actives. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2017 Ravi Sathasivam
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Hoffman Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 9:15 PM
Beautiful tribute to a sweet little girl Ravi!~Enjoyed~Che :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 2:48 PM
I can relate to the love Ravi...with our granddaughter who just turned five. A beautiful tribute to her! 7 ; )
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:44 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Ball Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 10:24 AM
Lovely Ravi. I could see the lovely little one dancing about as I read your tribute to her sweetness. Great job and thanks for sharing. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:44 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 9:04 AM
May the Lord keep her healthy and happy and may forever be a source of joy for you and your wife and her siblings and friends! Wonderful warm and loving poem dear, Ravi! A seven!
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Dalei Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 11:12 PM
Very cute piece. Wonderful write. A7..........//hugs
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Ricci Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Hello Ravi. Such pride comes through not to mention love. She sounds adorable and so sweet. I hope the sweetness always remains with her. Thank you for sharing Olivia with us. Well done throughout. And yes, I bet you are busy with the activities.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 4:22 PM
she sounds like the best little girl ever, Ravi. This really shows great admiration and love of her.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Smith Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 12:44 PM
I can feel your love for her.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:46 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Enjoyed this lovely poem, Ravi. I see that Sri Lankan children are no different from Maltese ones!! It is good to have normal and active children, even if sometimes they might send us a bit crazy:) Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 9:10 AM
- Sounds like a lovely girl ... beautifully written about Olivia, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:41 AM
Thank you for your comment Anne. Appreciated very much. Hugs xxx
Gupta Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Lovely ... An angel ...
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:46 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Williams Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 6:21 AM
She is your Everything. well put.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:46 AM
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May Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 5:57 AM
She is the apple of your eye..Beautiful write Ravi
Sathasivam Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 4:47 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
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