Our Sweet Little Girl Olivia

Our Sweet Little Girl Olivia..... Olivia is our sweet little girl with her charming face She dances like a butterfly and swim like a fish She talks like a parrot and act like a grown woman She laughs with joyful heart and attracts us with her sweet smiles She sleeps like an angel floating in the clouds She is like a candle of the house who keeps everyone in illuminate She is an intelligent little girl with so much enthusiastic with her lessons She is such a brave girl brings love and strength to our house She loves her papa and mama with plenty of kisses shared She fights with her sisters but she love them so much She always plays with her friends and sometime drive them crazy too She is our sweet little girl who keeps us happy with her actives. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2017 Ravi Sathasivam
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Date: 5/8/2017 9:15:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to a sweet little girl Ravi!~Enjoyed~Che :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 2:48:00 PM
I can relate to the love Ravi...with our granddaughter who just turned five. A beautiful tribute to her! 7 ; )
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/24/2017 4:44:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated.
Date: 3/20/2017 10:24:00 AM
Lovely Ravi. I could see the lovely little one dancing about as I read your tribute to her sweetness. Great job and thanks for sharing. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:44:00 AM
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Date: 3/20/2017 9:04:00 AM
May the Lord keep her healthy and happy and may forever be a source of joy for you and your wife and her siblings and friends! Wonderful warm and loving poem dear, Ravi! A seven!
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:45:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2017 11:12:00 PM
Very cute piece. Wonderful write. A7..........//hugs
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:45:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2017 7:27:00 PM
Hello Ravi. Such pride comes through not to mention love. She sounds adorable and so sweet. I hope the sweetness always remains with her. Thank you for sharing Olivia with us. Well done throughout. And yes, I bet you are busy with the activities.
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:45:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2017 4:22:00 PM
she sounds like the best little girl ever, Ravi. This really shows great admiration and love of her.
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:45:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2017 12:44:00 PM
I can feel your love for her.
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:46:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2017 10:10:00 AM
Enjoyed this lovely poem, Ravi. I see that Sri Lankan children are no different from Maltese ones!! It is good to have normal and active children, even if sometimes they might send us a bit crazy:) Regards // paul
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Date: 3/19/2017 9:10:00 AM
- Sounds like a lovely girl ... beautifully written about Olivia, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/24/2017 4:41:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Anne. Appreciated very much. Hugs xxx
Date: 3/19/2017 6:22:00 AM
Lovely ... An angel ...
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:46:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2017 6:21:00 AM
She is your Everything. well put.
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:46:00 AM
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Date: 3/19/2017 5:57:00 AM
She is the apple of your eye..Beautiful write Ravi
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Date: 3/24/2017 4:47:00 AM
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