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Our Sunset

Old furniture thrown away,
             hindrance in life.
            We gave the best
           teaching knowlege.
           We sow in the rain,
            we have drought 
               in the sunset.

allusionangelblessingdestinyoldfree verse

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Darlene De Beaulieu

June 8, 2023 at 3:04 PM

Hello Maria, I enjoyed this poem. I love the sunsets they are beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu

June 9, 2023 at 4:13 AM

Good morning Maria, You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

June 9, 2023 at 12:47 AM

Good morning Darlene. Thank you so much. I hope you have a nice day too. I will write you soon. Take carexx

Yann Rolland

May 17, 2023 at 11:16 PM

beautiful, i thought you are or were a teacher, graceful penning appreciated

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

May 18, 2023 at 12:34 AM

Good morning Yann. Why did you think I was a teacher?. Yes, I am. I teach English to children. You said, you are from Brittany. I am from Galicia. The Nort western area of Spain. You know, Brittany and Galicia have some similar roots, as Scotland, Ireland...? Anyway, that s not important. Thank you and have a nice day.

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