Our Sunset

Old furniture thrown away, hindrance in life. We gave the best teaching knowlege. We sow in the rain, we have drought in the sunset.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/8/2023 3:04:00 PM

Hello Maria, I enjoyed this poem. I love the sunsets they are beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/9/2023 4:13:00 AM

Good morning Maria, You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/9/2023 12:47:00 AM

Good morning Darlene. Thank you so much. I hope you have a nice day too. I will write you soon. Take carexx

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/17/2023 11:16:00 PM

beautiful, i thought you are or were a teacher, graceful penning appreciated

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/18/2023 12:34:00 AM

Good morning Yann. Why did you think I was a teacher?. Yes, I am. I teach English to children. You said, you are from Brittany. I am from Galicia. The Nort western area of Spain. You know, Brittany and Galicia have some similar roots, as Scotland, Ireland...? Anyway, that s not important. Thank you and have a nice day.