Our Sun

Our Sun, a dawn glow, start of a distant show, its rising strength, sun shines at length, Bursting its flaming ball, over the mountains so tall, sprouting bright rays in stacks, through crevices and cracks, in all glory and power, the brightness starts to shower, all over waters and land, spectacular glow so grand, build-up of charging warmth a start, day begins in colorful art, life consuming it’s energy, water vacuumed and plant life blooms, all kind seeking shade from bright light and heat, soon twilight, the finale, to a beautiful day of energizing warmth and display, life slows, dark shadows, in anticipation of next days show of new light.
09/22/2016 Contest - Twlight
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May Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 3:53 AM
Very nicely penned Mark....GL in the contest
Van Der Merwe Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:12 AM
Thank you for reading Joseph Regards, Mark
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