Our Sun

I love the sunrise, soothing nightmares embraces. The thrill as sunlight mirrors life, on clear blue waters Adoring the sunshine, caressing summertimes beaches. To gaze at sunsets, with nostalgic feelings. Believing the secret of all creation. Is an eternal flame that shines radiantly.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2015 8:59:00 PM

wow, great poetry, George!!

George Seal
Date: 8/29/2015 1:48:00 PM

Hello Andrea, thankyou for your generous complements. Kindest regards. George.

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 11:19:00 PM

George. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

George Seal
Date: 8/29/2015 1:55:00 PM

Hi SKAT, well yes our sun is the sustainer of all life on earth. Thankyou for your kind comments on my poem. My regards to you as always. George.