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Our Spirits Soared


We met in school-  he was younger than me,
one day his dark fathomless eyes met mine-
I, part Ojibwe-  he was First Nation Cree,
     our spirits connected and soon did twine.
     soon lovers, and friends,
     we talked of odds and ends,
     and of life's twisting bends,
                            and stepping stones,
        we spoke in tones,
           about unknowns.
We spoke of truth, love, wisdom over tea,
respect, bravery on the grass, supine;
about humility under a tree . . . 
                            our spirits soared free.

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February 20, 2017

Rhyme/Our Spirits Soared
Copyright Protected, ID 17- 877-778-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

S ubmitted toContest 300
Brian Strand

Ninth Place
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Submitted to the contest, Younger People Who Inspire You
Brenda Chiri

Fifth Place
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Warrior Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 10:17 PM
Congrats!!! Constance...well deserved my friend...hope your recovery is fully complete...are prayers are still with you...god bless...^WW^
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March 15, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Very nice, Broken Wings, congratulations on your well deserved win... Hugs ~*
Parker Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 5:39 PM
no greater friendship than one born from the heart of understanding..good luck dear poet
La France Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 7:05 PM
Frederic thank you for the sweet comment
Sands Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Very Nice ! Good luck in the contest :)
La France Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Heidi thank you for the compliment
Marie Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 5:16 PM
This is beautiful writing, divinely penned. I felt the strength of their bond and the last line is a powerful one.:-) What a gift friends are.:-) A joy to read. blessings, lynn
La France Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Lynn thanks for that lovely comment
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February 20, 2017 at 4:02 PM
A sweet and engaging write! Good luck in the contest :) xomo
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February 20, 2017 at 7:01 PM
Maureen thanks for the encouragement, appreciate
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