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We met in school- he was younger than me, one day his dark fathomless eyes met mine- I, part Ojibwe- he was First Nation Cree, our spirits connected and soon did twine. soon lovers, and friends, we talked of odds and ends, and of life's twisting bends, and stepping stones, we spoke in tones, about unknowns. We spoke of truth, love, wisdom over tea, respect, bravery on the grass, supine; about humility under a tree . . . our spirits soared free. ____________________ February 20, 2017 Rhyme/Our Spirits Soared Copyright Protected, ID 17- 877-778-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. S ubmitted toContest 300 Brian Strand Ninth Place ______________________ Submitted to the contest, Younger People Who Inspire You Brenda Chiri Fifth Place

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Date: 6/22/2017 10:17:00 PM
Congrats!!! Constance...well deserved my friend...hope your recovery is fully complete...are prayers are still with you...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 3/15/2017 5:53:00 PM
Very nice, Broken Wings, congratulations on your well deserved win... Hugs ~*
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Date: 2/20/2017 5:39:00 PM
no greater friendship than one born from the heart of understanding..good luck dear poet
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2017 7:05:00 PM
Frederic thank you for the sweet comment
Date: 2/20/2017 5:19:00 PM
Very Nice ! Good luck in the contest :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2017 7:03:00 PM
Heidi thank you for the compliment
Date: 2/20/2017 5:16:00 PM
This is beautiful writing, divinely penned. I felt the strength of their bond and the last line is a powerful one.:-) What a gift friends are.:-) A joy to read. blessings, lynn
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2017 7:03:00 PM
Lynn thanks for that lovely comment
Date: 2/20/2017 4:02:00 PM
A sweet and engaging write! Good luck in the contest :) xomo
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2017 7:01:00 PM
Maureen thanks for the encouragement, appreciate

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