- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -

One heartfelt feeling touches warmly teardrops
The rain glides through the air like an angels cry, a beautiful sight

Walking rays on deep sands footprints left behind
As two silhouettes in the shadow of two bodies remain

Circle of light radiates emotions true 
Through your deep gaze, if only I knew what I was going to say

Falling crystals from the fountain sparkling dewdrops 
The unfathomable grace and beauty it holds

A sun forever rises in your sweet loving gentle smile 
Tell me that this is real,and it will last forever 

As the butterfly waltzes within the fields of dreams 
Idyllic without uphills our love will never fade away

A flower breathes nodding in the wind slowly captured
Fluttering hope blows warmly kissing petals breathless

Heart of a rose you dance on its breeze murmuring sighs 
Being in your arms I feel safer and stronger than I've ever felt






- Unrhymed Couplet -
Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  17.06.2015 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Negron Flores Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Excellent poem. It touched my heart.
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:31 AM
- Nayda, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Excellent beauty of love of two beautiful hearts twinkling in the ecstatic sky filled with romantic sensation. Pure invaluable classic gem beautifully colored. 7++ from me. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:46 AM
- Dear friend Bl, a pleasure that you enjoy the poem:- Our Souls Were Always Meant To Be -:) - Many thanks for visit a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Beautiful write you two. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 5:01 PM
- A pleasure to share with you, dear Phyllis - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Anand Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 12:01 PM
It is a very beautiful poem and you can imagine its beauty while reading along!
Andresen Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 12:25 PM
- Nikita, thanks for visiting and comments - A pleasure to share with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vidal Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 8:50 AM
This is a romantic poem with profound meanings. The both of you took me there, Anne-Lise! Regards, Christopher
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 11:55 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Christopher :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 5:11 PM
I like the butterfly line...Very good co write...best wishes
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 5:34 AM
- A pleasure to share, Joseph - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sergi Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 1:47 PM
Hi, Anne Lise: A beautiful love poem with profound words flowing in each stanza.
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 6:27 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horn Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 5:05 AM
Anne, Awe Shucks. Just clicked on AllState ad again. Had to read your great poem first before I started typing up my three. Jim Horn
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:11 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Hits the Heart at Home. Great POD
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:11 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Another beautiful and romantic poem, Anne Lise & Liam. Congrats on this being chosen POTD!! All the best. // paul
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:04 AM
- A pleasure to share, Paul :) - Thanks for congratulations and visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Anne-Lise Dear One and Liam Mate!! I figured right on this one with my comment earlier that it looks like you two had another POTD in the waiting. And you do!! Many Congratulations on this honor and for this wonderful unrhymed couplet. Most Excellent!! Best Always, Gary
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:03 AM
- It feels great and I am happy for both of us :) - Thanks for congratulations, dear friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Anne-Lise congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 3:06 AM
- Thanks for congratulations, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Christian Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Beautiful and romanticly written, Thanks for your kind feed back on my acoustic poem CLEAN God is just so good, I got baptized 21 June 2004 it was a Sunday and it was fathers day, so in spiritual years ill be 21 tomorrow, my son asked me if I can buy cake bless him, 21 is his and my daughters fave number, we all joke about it.
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 3:05 AM
- Happy birthday :))))) - Of course you have to buy a cake :))) - Thank you for your visit and comment, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Anne-Lise, beautifully penned by two wonderful poets 7 and thanks for visiting my poem dancing flowers
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 3:01 AM
- B.W., nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:04 PM
Anne-lise this is a lovely romantic write! Congrats on POTD! Love, KIm
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:04 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:57 PM
popped by anne lise to congratulate you and say your pen sparkled in this write beautiful and to thank you deeply dear pal always with a smile and also thank you everyone for the heartfelt wonderful comments truly appreciated
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:03 PM
- Congratulations to you Liam, remember that you own 50% of these beautiful lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends. Well done! So very happy for you both:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:07 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Konos Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations.....
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Thanks.....
Y. Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. You two write teriffic together:) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:35 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 7:47 AM
back to congratulation on Poem of the Day Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:35 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 7:21 AM
The two of you write beautifully together from the same romantic place! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:34 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations - A pleasure to share with you, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dome Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 6:02 AM
This is so beautiful it's breath taking. You could't find a more romantic tender poem with as much depth and feeling as this one. A all time fav for me. A dream of a write.well done Pete. 7 +.
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:39 AM
- Peter, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:22 AM
PLays out like a windchime, Anne-Lise. Lovely, lilting write. Viv x
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:38 AM
- Viv, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 10:30 PM
pretty images. I especially like the line about fluttering hope!!
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:38 AM
- Andrea, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Great colaboration!
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:37 AM
- Richard, nice that you enjoy our poem - thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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