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Our Soul Seal

You are my love Pure like a dove How can I avow my deep care? You dye my life With drum and fife How can I show we're a good pair? I hold you in My eyes and grin How can I not love you, my dear? You fill my mind New hope I find How can I not keep my muse near? You make me burn I toss and turn How can I rest till I see you? I pen a song For you, I long How can I hush till I woo you? You are my rock Key to my lock How can I bind you to my side? This love I feel Is our soul seal How can I this joy ever hide?

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/6/2023 12:49:00 PM

"Our Soul Seal" is a lovely write. This would make a great card to give. Be blessed as you are writing away.......................

Ink Empress

Date: 10/3/2023 8:29:00 PM

How beautiful and soul warming is this write! so lyrical and touching! I really love the line “ how can i not keep my muse near” wow! I felt that! “ i pen a song for you” “ you make me burn” gosh! This is so good! Another hard form this was and you’ve nailed it really: its your flow and how calmly youv woven four letter words that describe your love which left me in awe! Mine is nothing compared to this brilliant poem. Goodluck for the contest

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/3/2023 1:38:00 AM

A great love story, a poem that almost got away. Sometimes I feel so tired. Blessings

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/30/2023 6:57:00 AM

WoW! Jo, You have penned such a beautiful and engaging love story. I enjoyed it very much. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis