Our Soul

It
begins
from out of
the energy
that surrounds us all.
It is not only mine
for I am but a part of
the Soul that is the universe
having a human experience
through all energy within you and me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gorelick Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Nice one..glad for your success in Michaels contest. BG
Mckenzie Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Sue Great write Congratulations on your win in the contest! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 5:53 AM
So beautifully written! Congrats dear Sue on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 12:21 AM
Congrats on your success with this poem Sue.Rgds Brian
Golden Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 4:51 PM
Beautiful write, Sue! Congrats on your placing in Michael's contest! Donna G.
Dvorkis Avatar
January 2, 2009 at 7:28 AM
Hi Sue, This is really cool. I like the shape that expands with each line, the way the universe is in perpetual expansion from what physicists tell us. At some point I wondered why the Soul of the universe would bother having a human experience since it seems pretty limited compared to the energy you speak of.
Fawcett Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 2:30 PM
How very true, Sue, and so much a reflection of my own philosophy. Great write. Love, Nigel
Okubo Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 5:32 AM
So very true, We are one with all living things.Very nicely done Sue. Thank you for your kind comments.
Reynolds Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 3:20 AM
Yes, so very very true. a lovely poem Sue, love, Kristin
Winter Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 5:53 PM
Love this form and it goes perfectly with the truth and beauty of your write. Thanks sue for your thoughtful feel better message. I think it worked cause the last hour I am doing much better. Thank you! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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