Our Son, Our Tears, Our Tomorrow

Born from my soul new to this earth
This marvel of life that we call birth

Dedication endurance, gestation of time
To hold him so close our son so fine

Tears from my eyes, fulfilment of joy
Proud parents we are of our little boy

We look to tomorrow to live our lives
As we remember his dad whom fate has deprived

He was a soldier, just nineteen years old
Too early to leave us for his young life to fold

At Southampton Docks, where I waved him farewell
My tears were so different our future looked swell

Frequent letters arrived declaring our love
To the birth of our son a gift from above

Then came the day your whole world falls apart
A knock at the door, where do they start

They sit you down, knowing the words you will hear
My eyes start to swell, with a different tear

They tell of my husband, father to our son
Heroic in war, lost to the enemy gun

They leave, the door closes, I'm in momentary empty
My life not that long ago was blissful of plenty

We said our farewells my son and I
With a lifetime of tears I will internally cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/6/2010 6:58:00 AM
another one I am speechless James .. beautiful work and some powerful lines in this one Love Jayne
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Date: 5/27/2010 1:43:00 PM
So touching James and I so can relate as my youngest in the military in Iraq.. I posted a blog today to remind everyone the meaning of the Memorial Day Weekend festivities, fun, but mostly honors to those in the military..please check it out.. my question..is this a true story? a lost son? I know u lost your brother in youth but a son also.. please say its not so... we all pray for those in service ..an exceptional tribute.. from the Highlander.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:58:00 AM
This has so much sadness that it breaks my heart. A very touching write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/26/2010 3:04:00 PM
Oh James, your words paint a picture of such sadness, it's easy to relate to this womans suffering, well done my friend.
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Date: 5/26/2010 2:05:00 PM
very interesting, very heart felt poem, and touching, have a nice day James,..p.d.
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