Our Silly Kids

Let me tell you about our kids
We never know quite what they'll do
But they sure are a silly pair
The girl is four, the boy but two

The four year old is quite healthy
Without even an ounce of fat
When she goes out she'll take a pee
We like to reward her for that!

Our two year old is very quick
One time he even caught a rat!
Oh and I forgot to mention
The girls a dog, the boy a cat!
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artlyy Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 10:16 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Laurie Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 7:43 PM
Hello Pat … what a ripper. Had me well and truly done until the final line - thank you Pat - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 5:27 AM
LOL! You forgot to mention... a knee slapper, Pat!
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