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This was written by the both of us in a deep insight into the truth 

How badacious and ironic that it is you that has become the thief of my time... For I have been robbed by the curses of spiritual starvation from spirits that possess... And it is through these tears of my errors that have resulted to what has become... An incomplete healing process that inevitably progresses this painful possession... There is an imagined landscape painted with stars that light the canvas of our invisibility... With a continual shifting of currents in this salty sea refusing to abide by its own decisions... A deception of the power of the tides to rob me once again of what I once thought was well-deserved... I now face the bitter truth, that I am entitled to nothing, but what my Dearest Saviour has reserved for me... And I find pure joy with my Dearest Father within these unspoken words... Casting out doubt.... I replace it with faith... A perfect knowledge has been obtained through the belief of the unseen... And thus we see....God does not believe in competition... And loves you more than I could ever love myself... a co authored ?piece by Liam Mc Daid and Christian McNeil?

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Date: 1/15/2017 5:44:00 PM
Liam and Christian ...What a blissful beauty of a poem this is.It touches both heart and soul.
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Date: 1/15/2017 5:05:00 PM
Hi Liam! Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful n' outstanding spiritual piece, that you have written here my dearest friend Liam in collaboration with Christian.Very spiritual n' inspirational about our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ.I truly enjoy it! Just dazzling!Very beautifully written piece Liam!Just awesome!Excellent imagery! Great collaboration! Just excellent!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A fav! Beautiful piece!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic, gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're better in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your Faith!And keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))I really hope you're feeling much better by now, n' recovering quickly from your very sad and tragic accident,Liam.Wish you always all the very best Liam!You deserve it all.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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