William Kelii Kekaula Poet Tanka

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Our Ring of Peace

*Image of World Peace by Pixabay.

Our Ring of Peace

There is a reason
the world is round and not square,
no cornering or
boxed-in, but let peace ring free
all around this world of ours.

2022 March 08
*1st Place*
World Peace
~~Robert James Liguori: Judged 2022 March 10

*HMS: 5,7,5,7,7.

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Robert James Liguori March 12, 2022 at 6:14 PM Circular peace, the world needs healing! Beautiful tanka! William Kelii Kekaula March 12, 2022 at 7:10 PM A generous deed, Robert, in honoring adherent participants, blessings my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet March 11, 2022 at 8:15 AM Wonderful and very inspirational writing William added to fav. Congratulations on your well-deserved win William Kelii Kekaula March 11, 2022 at 8:47 AM I'm appreciative for the fave, Lasaad, of this tight ditty being expounded upon my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex March 10, 2022 at 7:57 PM "let peace ring free all around" - A sincere wish! Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula March 10, 2022 at 11:03 PM wish, hope, whichever, Christyraj, thanks, Aloha~William

Paulette Calasibetta March 10, 2022 at 2:45 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest. Very inspirational write~"Let Peace ring free all around the world of ours"~says it all. Excellent~only wish it could be a reality. :)Paulette William Kelii Kekaula March 10, 2022 at 2:54 PM My thanks and a note of truth, Paulette, as we can only hope for the best my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith March 10, 2022 at 1:21 PM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Your line, "the world is round and not square." Make one think. Have a blessed day writing away....................... William Kelii Kekaula March 10, 2022 at 2:57 PM I seem to be a squarish sort, an enigma, Paula, hope to be well-rounded and roll with my imaginations my friend, Aloha~William

Vijay Pandit March 9, 2022 at 5:35 AM Your photo is awesome. I share your sentiments, William. William Kelii Kekaula March 9, 2022 at 9:55 AM A bit of a search ere my take of it, Vijay, I appreciate the mutuality my friend, Aloha~William