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'our Reverie'

cold hands and cold feet disperse as our lips connect outside world shut out we don’t require an island to create our reverie 15/05/2011... 18:58

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2011 3:53:00 PM

aha, a little gem I had overlooked somehow. Great idea this one. Thanks for your sweet comment on wisdom. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 9:46:00 AM

Wilma I just read the poem Sidney wrote for u as his inspiration..wow ..girl..it is super and u inspired him so much.. it is an awesome tribute to your sparking eye and great quality as a poetess luv.. .. u are a true inspiration to us all my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 1:39:00 PM

Sensual and passionate flow of feelings, Wilma

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/15/2011 4:12:00 PM

Wow ... Wilma, ...is it your poetry or am I having another hot flash again! ....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/15/2011 1:52:00 PM

oh yes, love or affection knows no place... radiant in all ways, wilms... i'm touched! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2011 12:16:00 PM

The "reverie" can occur anywhere that two people "connect." Somehow the outside world does seem to fade away. I hope this is an entry for Brian's contest, Wilma. It would surely be a winner for him just as it's a winner for me. Beautifully said! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 5/15/2011 11:00:00 AM

Ufff!This is so Hot and Sweet;)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/15/2011 10:28:00 AM

A card board box or a castle, love will still fill it up.... Beautiful observation... Love always Michael

James Foulk

Date: 5/15/2011 10:14:00 AM

Wilma this was a lovely piece of poetry, enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting on Pine cone kissing Needles.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2011 10:13:00 AM

oh this sounds so fine Wilma.. and the island is unto the two who create it luv.. our lips connect in luv as we are enjoying Italy to the fullest luv..