Home » Poems » Wilma Neels » 'our Reverie'

'our Reverie'

cold hands and cold feet disperse as our lips connect outside world shut out we don’t require an island to create our reverie 15/05/2011... 18:58

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2011 3:53:00 PM

aha, a little gem I had overlooked somehow. Great idea this one. Thanks for your sweet comment on wisdom. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 9:46:00 AM

Wilma I just read the poem Sidney wrote for u as his inspiration..wow ..girl..it is super and u inspired him so much.. it is an awesome tribute to your sparking eye and great quality as a poetess luv.. .. u are a true inspiration to us all my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 1:39:00 PM

Sensual and passionate flow of feelings, Wilma

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/15/2011 4:12:00 PM

Wow ... Wilma, ...is it your poetry or am I having another hot flash again! ....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/15/2011 1:52:00 PM

oh yes, love or affection knows no place... radiant in all ways, wilms... i'm touched! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2011 12:16:00 PM

The "reverie" can occur anywhere that two people "connect." Somehow the outside world does seem to fade away. I hope this is an entry for Brian's contest, Wilma. It would surely be a winner for him just as it's a winner for me. Beautifully said! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 5/15/2011 11:00:00 AM

Ufff!This is so Hot and Sweet;)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/15/2011 10:28:00 AM

A card board box or a castle, love will still fill it up.... Beautiful observation... Love always Michael

James Foulk

Date: 5/15/2011 10:14:00 AM

Wilma this was a lovely piece of poetry, enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting on Pine cone kissing Needles.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2011 10:13:00 AM

oh this sounds so fine Wilma.. and the island is unto the two who create it luv.. our lips connect in luv as we are enjoying Italy to the fullest luv..