'our Reverie'

cold hands and cold feet disperse as our lips connect outside world shut out we don’t require an island to create our reverie
15/05/2011... 18:58
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 3:53 PM
aha, a little gem I had overlooked somehow. Great idea this one. Thanks for your sweet comment on wisdom. LUv, Andrea
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May 18, 2011 at 9:46 AM
Wilma I just read the poem Sidney wrote for u as his inspiration..wow ..girl..it is super and u inspired him so much.. it is an awesome tribute to your sparking eye and great quality as a poetess luv.. .. u are a true inspiration to us all my friend..luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Sensual and passionate flow of feelings, Wilma
Dufresne Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Wow ... Wilma, ...is it your poetry or am I having another hot flash again! ....
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 1:52 PM
oh yes, love or affection knows no place... radiant in all ways, wilms... i'm touched! :) huggs, nette
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May 15, 2011 at 12:16 PM
The "reverie" can occur anywhere that two people "connect." Somehow the outside world does seem to fade away. I hope this is an entry for Brian's contest, Wilma. It would surely be a winner for him just as it's a winner for me. Beautifully said! Love, Carolyn
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May 15, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Ufff!This is so Hot and Sweet;)
Falotico Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 10:28 AM
A card board box or a castle, love will still fill it up.... Beautiful observation... Love always Michael
Foulk Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Wilma this was a lovely piece of poetry, enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting on Pine cone kissing Needles.
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May 15, 2011 at 10:13 AM
oh this sounds so fine Wilma.. and the island is unto the two who create it luv.. our lips connect in luv as we are enjoying Italy to the fullest luv..
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