Our Poetic Crush - a Collaboration With Deb Wilson

Your words speak to me, causing my heart to furiously race.
It's poetic ecstasy and I can literally see your angelic face!
Each stanza, each line, gives me images in my mind's eye.
You bathe me in your sunshine and the warmth begins to amplify!

With our poetry we collaborate, and I can't help but fantasize.
Your verse makes it hard to concentrate, and your comments give me butterflies!
I want to reach out and caress you; sorry, but I don't mean to make you blush.
So baby let me undress you with this sensual poetic crush!

Allow me to stroke you, feel your warm breath as I write each line.
Capture you with my poetry, knowing you are the fabric and design.
As the sweet words tumble out of me, I know you feel it too.
This poetic crush has got to me and baby I know what to do!

I'll memorize these lines so I can whisper them in your ear.
When the time comes that I can actually hold you near.
You won't be sorry or afraid for these words I write are true.
This poetic crush will quickly turn to love, something brand new!

Note: I wrote 1st and 2nd stanzas
Deb Wilson wrote the 3rd and 4th stanzas (I love this Deb!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/9/2011 10:40:00 AM
Very passionate and beautiful piece. Nicely written.
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Date: 1/6/2011 8:45:00 AM
Another lovely collaboration, JAM and Deb! Keep them coming. I prefer these to those slams! lol Love, Audrey
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