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I was an eminent, solar physicist, like the blushing rose, craving renown. Each butterscotch morning I drove to work, and toiled until red sundown. The observatory was the place I loved, keeping watch on our nearest star; Like a pale moon that sits staring all night, its gaze near, anyplace we are. I studied intense sunspots daily, as has been done over a thousand years, To gain comprehensive understanding, as the weatherman into sky peers. Fantastic, fandango dawn was fond memory, when faithful friends visited, Passing minty, frenzied, fragrant meadows, as fuchsia butterflies pivoted. Fiery, ruby flowers were out of focus, when family flew through fine mists, In the featured, fresh hours of mulberry dawn, for loving hugs, and a kiss. I lived in the house of graceful golden, each day washed in saffron fervor, Where yellow jasmine bloomed, on days that gold honeybees murmured. Sparrows sailed crimson sunset skies, on my street of the startling colors; As crickets shared the afterglow news, like the memory of past summers. New night necessitated neighborly visits, after sun issued its notice, nicely, And silky laughter filled nitrous, nebulous air, as tales were told, concisely. Summer was in red strawberry fields, in fruity snapdragons, breathing fire, When sun put sea green butterflies in motion, until that plum sunset of ire. And lovers called the moon 'honey,' as pointy stars fell in duskiness of night; And emerald trees grew tall and charming, striving for sunbeams of delight! One day I woke to a world dark as night, the dawn of sun's first vanishing. The dire plight was not better at noon, as if a cruel queen were banishing! World press went wild with conjecture! It was the most fantastic story ever, Like gone, garnet robins, gossiping giddily, in the obscure skies of whatever. But, how I missed my fervent, warm friend, of interminable orangey caress, Like apricot rose of yesterday bliss, now gone to gracious heaven's address. Yet, after a mere twenty four woeful hours, cherry sun was rising like mad, As if nothing whatever had been amiss, and birds sang, they were so glad! No one ever understood what had occurred, but the sun had skipped a day; And a connected earth missed one, too, like a skipped beat as music plays. Many halcyon years later, mysterious time and cosmos are still in harmony, As we're adhering to golden tradition, and violet days we knew, commonly.

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Date: 1/18/2024 7:45:00 PM
You are quite the 'Renaissance Woman,' Evelyn: Both an 'eminent solar physicist' and an 'award-winning' poet --- as rare as a sunny day in a winter storm. Congrats!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/19/2024 4:44:00 PM
What a wonderful compliment, Gershon! Thank you for the sunshine you've brought into this particular winter day. I hope your weekend is nice. :)
Date: 1/17/2024 6:35:00 AM
the sun inspires the best, never saw all his colors, great poem, thanks Evelyn
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Date: 1/17/2024 12:58:00 PM
So nice to know you enjoyed this, Yann. Thank you. :)
Date: 1/14/2024 11:57:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem with a enigmatic photo. Thumbs up.
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Date: 1/14/2024 12:02:00 PM
I appreciate your enthusiasm very much, Hilda. Many thanks. :)
Date: 1/13/2024 1:21:00 PM
A wonderful write/story/picture. Love It... Have a wonderful weekend writing away...................
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments, Paula. Do have a lovely weekend yourself. :)
Date: 1/13/2024 5:55:00 AM
Another epic set of couplets my friend.. Your poem beautifully captures the essence of a dedicated solar physicist's life, seamlessly blending scientific pursuits with the vivid colors of existence. The metaphors, like the 'blushing rose' and 'fantastic, fandango dawn,' add a poetic layer to the narrative, making the scientific journey a lyrical dance through time and space.
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:43:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your lovely comment, Silent One. Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts. :)
Date: 1/13/2024 5:15:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey you describe --quite eloquent story telling, my friend. The mystery towards the ending challenges the imagination. Excellent as always, Evelyn.
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:36:00 PM
I am elated by your warm words of appreciation, Vijay. Thank you very much. :)
Date: 1/13/2024 3:54:00 AM
Oh my, beautiful Evelyn, now you turned to a solar physicist! That's absolutely exciting! I dunno from where do these exotic and elegant ideas come in your mind.. You write fiction stories so elegantly, capturing vivid storytelling in a poetic way.. I look forward to read your Saturday series every week and wait eagerly.. This was a purely fascinating read as it took me to a charismatic realm of sunlit fragrances.. Your descriptions are absolutely ethereal especially colours, gems & flowers that
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:32:00 PM
Dear Hiya, it thrills me that you find these tales to be magical, and also that you await them eagerly. Thank you so very much for your gracious words and kind insights. Also, your fave brings smiles. :):)
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:56:00 AM
you've described to weave intricate details in this poem, ahh, truly bewitching they are.. "cherry sun was rising like mad", "apricot rose of yesterday bliss, now gone to gracious heaven's address", "orangey caress", "Summer was in red strawberry fields" Gosh, this is another FAV from you.. Keep weaving magic, always :)
Date: 1/13/2024 2:10:00 AM
Beautiful as ever with a mixture of visual sights, colorful beauties and interesting subjects.
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for the pleasure of your gratifying observations. I hope your weekend is nice.
Date: 1/12/2024 9:53:00 PM
This is beyond amazing! I loved your use of gems colors and so much more to enhance the imagery painted in such an artistic manner. I especially loved the lines “ But, how I missed my fervent, warm friend, of interminable orangey caress, Like apricot rose of yesterday bliss, now gone to gracious heaven's address.“ th nostalgia and evocative touch in those last lines is soul stirring! A fave it is for me
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Date: 1/13/2024 3:09:00 PM
I extend my utmost thanks for your gracious words, Ink. I am so delighted by them, and and by your kind fave. I hope the New Year is bringing you joy so far. :)

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