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Absolute is her adorable attitude, blessed and bestowed with a burning benignity, city girl caught within life’s calamitousness, darling to all that dare dote upon her. Naked! Economize, be efficient, enthuse she must, Fight! For her felicity. Feel! For those whom fall, groping gouging with a grotesque gravitation, hold on to her hospitable habitation! Indurate through incest! Injured through inurement, justice she seeks, a juvenile Judy no more, kicked by society, knackered by its keepers, laminated personalities lost in love! Morning time! Brings the sunlight, the mist the misery, Nymph nurtured by noble, just to serve motley men, Org*sm Cried off, just an opaque memory, primate pants, within the woodland glen! Quaint in monthly quarantine, desire still to quell, rebellious rivals, rustic, but youth on side, sanctimonious salutations satisfy, the test for technique, tediously still apply! Unable to command usage. “Utensil spent” Valuation decreasing via vulgar gent, wise mind, weary body responds to the wanker, xquisite flame soon xtinguish by the banker! Yet she that lived in yonder past, youthfulness yielded, zero hour approaches. “Erotic zone no more!” because of censorships some words had to be removed or changed. © Harry J Horsman 1993 Alliteration and Abecedarian poem entered into A Poet Destroyers 004 contest

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Date: 9/9/2014 7:00:00 PM
Great unique write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:28:00 PM
Harry, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
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Date: 9/8/2014 2:18:00 PM
Harry this is a fantastic poem I am sorry I could not place you 1st as it only had the year not a full date and was entered as an Alliteration ty for your support hugs 7
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Date: 9/8/2014 8:53:00 AM
I didn't realize this was an ABC poem until reading the comments. Outstanding and painful write. For me truly one of the best entries in the contest! 7 Rating.
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:19:00 AM
Enjoyed the story nicely done, harry. congrats
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Date: 9/8/2014 2:05:00 AM
congratulations harry this is so clever and sad, but the worst thing I see it is dated unlike the blog suggests..so it is a number one in my eyes xx
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Date: 9/7/2014 5:36:00 PM
A very sad story. congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2014 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations Harry. So sad.
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Date: 9/7/2014 2:13:00 PM
you created a fantastic story detailing Pegs sad life - would have personally loved to see this higher up the ranking harry :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/18/2012 7:31:00 AM
Wonderful Harry! So much vivid detail... much feeling/emotion... congrats on such a fine work... Terry (By the way, you have so many poems, this one was hard to find)
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Date: 10/30/2011 7:43:00 PM
Can't believe what I am seeing Harry, the alphabet, then the story, a horrendous one to be sure and the amazing words; all weave a sad but fascinating story. This takes some time to absorb but so well done!
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:23:00 PM
WhooWow! this is really something, harry! But what a sad, sad life for Peggy :( -- this truly is a creative write and how cool of you to do it in alliteration and abc forms...
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Date: 9/16/2011 5:13:00 AM
now this is waht i call a fearless write; going out of the normal bounds to create something so inventive, harry.. kudos! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:36:00 PM
What a poor creature she was, harry. I saw after a while what you were doing. you went from A to Z with each line. That was quite ambitious!!
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Date: 9/16/2011 4:27:00 AM
spot on andrea, peg went through the a to z of life in 20 short years, her only crime was she was beautiful.
Date: 9/15/2011 8:35:00 PM
fantastic use of Alliteration Harry but more important the story within the lines luv.. impressive and intense my friend...luv..
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Date: 9/15/2011 6:33:00 PM
whew, grueling! quite a write! ~N
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