Our Own Paradise

Take my hand, take a step forward!! 
Take a breathe,
Let's run away to world where there's just you and me!! 
Just you and me lost in our own paradise!! 
Coz all I wanna do with you is, 
Keep you safe from all the sadness in the world,
I know you've suffered a lot before, 
Gimme a chance!! Just one faithful chance to take your breath away!! 
You take me to a world where there's just you and me!! 
Just you and me lost in our own paradise!! 
Coz all I want is you to be happy 
Just be strong and carry on 
With me by your side 
Take my hand, 
Let's run away To a world where there's just you and me!! 
Just you and me lost in our own paradise!!
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Agustin Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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July 4, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Isn't it wonderful to have dreams, just be together, no one else in the whole wold. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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