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Our October Sky

October sky, the 1st we celebrate, a seasons heart yearned treasured moment, Sun rises, new beginnings, Enlightens nature, we seek atonement. Dawn lights an autumn’s crisp chill, christening fallen leaves of tomorrow, Decorated front porch memories, earthly heritage, smothered sorrow. Passes monsoons, thirst quenched foliage, brought on dust storms, summer’s breeze. Colors dancing, enchanting harvest, Orange golden glows, on resting trees, Cinnamon sneaks by steaming cider, mulls a spiced aroma essence, Caramel apple, child’s smile, escapes harvest reminisce. A wonder inspired walk, a gentle kick to wisp away, Tree’s blessings, fallen life, decorated memories of yesterday. Crisp leaves falling, sprinkled mist, dripping dew drops land by chance, Hearts pitter pattered warmth speaks, provoking sudden dance. Fawns brook side, a mother’s love, protectant father thru seasons dressing, Such beauty grace lingers freely, coins free, bestows natures blessing. Falls door opens, touched hearts so deeply, awakened sober love outpours, God’s mystique he created goodness, for all of us he adores. Daylights autumn beauty, followed by nightfall’s tucked in kiss, A glowing lullaby, we’re put to bed; our harvests moon we’ve greatly missed.

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Date: 11/1/2019 3:18:00 PM
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Date: 11/1/2019 3:18:00 PM
Awesome
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Date: 1/8/2017 5:25:00 PM
A very lovely poem, Chelcie! Eloquent and charming...An absolute joy to read - Very well done! All the very best for your New Year...May it be a fulfilling and contented one. My warmest regards. :) john
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 1/8/2017 5:29:00 PM
I really appreciate that John! Thank You!! Chelcie
Date: 12/25/2016 6:02:00 AM
:) Brilliant masterpiece. I'm in awe and speechless~ good job!
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 1/8/2017 5:30:00 PM
That makes me so happy!! Thank you! Chelcie
Date: 10/21/2016 4:23:00 AM
The warmth of this poem is indicative of Autumn's charm, although it may be a bit brisker, the moon shines brighter. Lovely imagery, I can smell the crisp air. :)
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/21/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much! ( :
Date: 10/4/2016 9:56:00 PM
The new Moon brought in the first day of October Chelcie. A time of new beginnings. You have portrayed the autumn season with breathtaking imagery in this beautiful poem. Congratulations on a most deserved POTD! 7 ; )
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/4/2016 10:04:00 PM
Connie, Thank you so so very much!! That means a lot coming from you!! ( :
Date: 10/4/2016 2:15:00 PM
imaginative of nature and descriptive, good for supporting the thought, but need more line on thought
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/4/2016 2:43:00 PM
Ok thanks!
Date: 10/4/2016 8:38:00 AM
This one is an extremely beautiful one, Chelcie:) lovely description:) congratulations on your POTD:)
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/4/2016 2:42:00 PM
I appreciate that Jo! ( : Thank You!!
Date: 10/4/2016 12:42:00 AM
A wonderful poem thoroughly enjoyed it... Simply beautiful /|\
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/4/2016 4:36:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it Rick!! Thank you! ( :
Date: 10/3/2016 6:06:00 PM
Hi Chelsie: thank you for a beautiful poem on the new month of October! I especially liked Cinnamon apple, chili's smile.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/3/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Ralph!! ( :
Date: 10/3/2016 1:12:00 PM
Congrats on being selected for P.O.T.D., wonderful imagery with vibrant colours and scenes.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/3/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thank You Seosamh! ( :
Date: 10/3/2016 12:43:00 PM
A VERY well deserved accolade for your amazing poem Chelcie - many many congrats on POTD as you know from my comment I LOVE this poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/3/2016 12:56:00 PM
Thank you SO SO much Jan!! ( : Hugs!! Chelcie xx
Date: 10/3/2016 7:24:00 AM
Yea Chelcie! Congratulations on POTD honors. I myself often take "A wonder inspired walk" Just love the imagery in this poem.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/3/2016 8:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Daniel!! Time to grab your hazelnut coffee & enjoy the season!! ( :
Date: 10/3/2016 6:21:00 AM
Beautifully written Chelcie, congratulations on POTD honors....
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/3/2016 8:28:00 AM
Oh wow! What a beautiful surprise this morning! Thank you so very much!!
Date: 10/2/2016 12:12:00 PM
Wow! I love your piece. I love it when I read nature poem. Thanks for posting.........A.M.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/2/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thank you very much!!! ( :
Date: 10/1/2016 4:00:00 PM
A beautiful poem Chelcie...love the imagery
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/1/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Tim! I appreciate that!! ( :
Date: 10/1/2016 2:11:00 PM
- A lovely October poem, Chelcie - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/1/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thank you SO SO much Anne-Lise!! ( : Hugs!!
Date: 10/1/2016 2:05:00 PM
what wonderful autumnal imagery in your vivid descriptive write Chelcie:-) am adding this to my faves its such a lovely poem about my favourite season:-) hugs jan xx7
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/1/2016 2:08:00 PM
My heart is smiling right now! Thank you so much Jan!! ( : XO! Hugs!!

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