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Our Oak In Autumn

I left my languid thoughts cloaked in leaves
dreaming of you 'neath our oak tree.


for Rick Parise's Crystalline Contest, 11/19/14

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Arlene Smith

January 4, 2015 at 12:24 PM

Only two lines, yet a beautiful, sweet story.. Wow! Loving reading from your list, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Faye Gibson

November 28, 2014 at 9:38 AM

Congratulations, Rhonda; beautifully done.

Len Gasun

November 26, 2014 at 10:21 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved topmost win my dear friend Rhonda! Big hug and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Sandip Goswami

November 24, 2014 at 2:14 PM

Excellent thoughts...Congratulations with love and respect...

Sara Kendrick

November 24, 2014 at 1:18 PM

I see your name is on the winner's list..It was awesome to see it there..Creative work needs a congrats..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 24, 2014 at 10:34 AM

Beautifully penned Rhonda. Congratulations on your first place top of the podium win.

Maurice Yvonne

November 24, 2014 at 7:24 AM

Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE win with this brilliant Crystaline.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 24, 2014 at 5:46 AM

Hi Rhonda! Congrats on win. You deserved it.How wonderful your poem is!...Love ...RAJAT

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2014 at 10:13 PM

wowowow, One I never saw yet. It was SO deserving of a bIg win. congrats, sweetie.

Rob Carmack

November 23, 2014 at 9:52 PM

Rhonda - congrats.

John Lawless

November 23, 2014 at 6:00 PM

WOW!...Rhonda......all I can say is WOW!

Debbie Guzzi

November 23, 2014 at 4:51 PM

So romantic. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Robert Stoner Jr

November 23, 2014 at 4:22 PM

congratulations on a well deserved win Rhonda

Sandra Haight

November 23, 2014 at 3:24 PM

Rhonda, congratulations on your 1st place win! Very dreamy. Sandra

Kayod5 Kayode

November 23, 2014 at 1:19 PM

Congrats on the win Rhonda,your is outstanding...huggs

Carrie Richards

November 23, 2014 at 1:02 PM

Such a melancholy poem........lovely work! Congrats to you!

David Mohn

November 23, 2014 at 12:41 PM

Big congrats on your #1 spot Rhonda...lovely

Jan Allison

November 23, 2014 at 11:42 AM

absolutely stunning Rhonda - many congrats you hit the top spot:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

November 19, 2014 at 5:36 PM

This is so very lovely Rhonda! These two lines are soaked in beauty. well done. // paul

Paul Callus

November 23, 2014 at 1:28 PM

..back again to congratulate you on placing first!!

Ilene Bauer

November 19, 2014 at 3:37 PM

this is very lovely, rhonda!

Liam Mcdaid

November 19, 2014 at 2:51 PM

really love the picture this drew for me rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 19, 2014 at 9:38 AM

- What a lovely poem in only two lines,Rhonda! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

November 19, 2014 at 9:03 AM

Lovely lines, Rhonda. Best wishes.

Our Oak In Autumn

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