Our Oak In Autumn

I left my languid thoughts cloaked in leaves
dreaming of you 'neath our oak tree.


for Rick Parise's Crystalline Contest, 11/19/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/4/2015 12:24:00 PM
Only two lines, yet a beautiful, sweet story.. Wow! Loving reading from your list, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 11/28/2014 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Rhonda; beautifully done.
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Date: 11/26/2014 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved topmost win my dear friend Rhonda! Big hug and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 11/24/2014 2:14:00 PM
Excellent thoughts...Congratulations with love and respect...
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Date: 11/24/2014 1:18:00 PM
I see your name is on the winner's list..It was awesome to see it there..Creative work needs a congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:34:00 AM
Beautifully penned Rhonda. Congratulations on your first place top of the podium win.
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Date: 11/24/2014 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE win with this brilliant Crystaline.
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Date: 11/24/2014 5:46:00 AM
Hi Rhonda! Congrats on win. You deserved it.How wonderful your poem is!...Love ...RAJAT
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Date: 11/23/2014 10:13:00 PM
wowowow, One I never saw yet. It was SO deserving of a bIg win. congrats, sweetie.
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Date: 11/23/2014 9:52:00 PM
Rhonda - congrats.
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Date: 11/23/2014 6:00:00 PM
WOW!...Rhonda......all I can say is WOW!
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:51:00 PM
So romantic. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:22:00 PM
congratulations on a well deserved win Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2014 3:24:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your 1st place win! Very dreamy. Sandra
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win Rhonda,your is outstanding...huggs
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:02:00 PM
Such a melancholy poem........lovely work! Congrats to you!
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Date: 11/23/2014 12:41:00 PM
Big congrats on your #1 spot Rhonda...lovely
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Date: 11/23/2014 11:42:00 AM
absolutely stunning Rhonda - many congrats you hit the top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:36:00 PM
This is so very lovely Rhonda! These two lines are soaked in beauty. well done. // paul
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:28:00 PM
..back again to congratulate you on placing first!!
Date: 11/19/2014 3:37:00 PM
this is very lovely, rhonda!
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:51:00 PM
really love the picture this drew for me rhonda
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Date: 11/19/2014 9:38:00 AM
- What a lovely poem in only two lines,Rhonda! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2014 9:03:00 AM
Lovely lines, Rhonda. Best wishes.
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