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My siblings and I wanted a dog How fun to take him for a jog! But not just any dog you see We wanted a Labrador puppy! We asked our parents gleefully They talked and replied thoughtfully "Care for this plant faithfully Then come back and talk to me" Day after day we tried our best Cared for our plant, by their request Naturally the day had come The plant was dead, our dream was done Seeing thus, hearts broke inside We tried our best but the flower died Dad came home and we told him the news He said "Come now, a dog we'll choose" We looked at each other all confused We thought we'd lost, that flower passed "No, you have won, it's fall at last!" Off to the pound! We talked joyfully A pet would join our family! We've had this 'pup' nine years now Our Labrador, a mix of Chow Our sweet, and cuddly, joyful friend We'll love him till the very end

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Date: 6/22/2023 7:08:00 AM
Nice one Anna, there's no better friend than a dog,they stay loyal until the end.
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Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 7/31/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thank you John! So very true they are amazing animals =D thank you for stopping by and commenting!
Date: 4/1/2023 3:04:00 PM
Great pen Anna Marie, dogs are great friends especially labradors. This has nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too, we had a black Labrador when growing up and it was a lovely dog. Blessings,Gordon
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Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 7/31/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Gordon! They are wonderful and sweet Best friends. I love our Labrador so much couldn't imagine life without our little furry friend. Thank you for stopping by and commenting!
Date: 3/27/2023 10:23:00 AM
Anna, so delightful and touching! What a great idea your parents had - to care for a flower as proof you and your siblings would care for a dog by creating a habit! Ingenious! Your poem has lovely rhyme that lyrically tells your story! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 3/31/2023 9:56:00 PM
Haha! It was pretty smart of them =) Thank you so much for your kind word and for stopping by and commenting I appreciate it! =D
Date: 3/27/2023 12:13:00 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Anna and congratulations on your 1st place win! :)
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Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 3/31/2023 9:55:00 PM
Thank you for my placement! I am honored. =)
Date: 3/27/2023 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Well deserved , very sweet poem:)
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Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 3/31/2023 9:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Victoria! I truly appreciate it. =)
Date: 3/24/2023 12:11:00 AM
A lovely poem about your dog. Well done.
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Anna Marie Kaianah
Date: 3/24/2023 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much! =D

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