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Our Moon

The moon, our constant companion Our faithful satellite Always up there somewhere Every single night A wondrous, mystical land It controls the ocean tide I would love to visit there someday That would be one hell of a ride When mankind paid a visit They saw a barren land But they never explored what lies within That’s still something we don’t understand I believe that someone could live there Maybe we will find out soon Perhaps a wise and ancient race Or simply just the man in the moon But for now we’ll have to take it as given That the moon is deserted I fear And rather like this poem I just wrote With little or no atmosphere.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 6/6/2013 10:27:00 PM
Hi Gary, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight
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Date: 6/4/2013 3:47:00 PM
Hello Gary, I read the poem. and like what I read... no i wonder if someone can live in the moon. ps.... This poem is perfect to enter in my latest contest. I have 7 spots open. please stop by and consider the fun... xox~ LINDA
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Gary Wayne Hill
Date: 6/4/2013 4:52:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome, I already entered the poem in your contest (I think) :)