Our Moon

The gleam as I watch its circular face
Each way I look it watches me 
I am sure it knows that I stare 
My eyes so wide with a glisten from its reflection
It almost gives me a sudden feeling of affection 
A deepness that covers me 
A mystery that surrounds me 
Its boldness, I feel, I can reach to it, its status magical 
Some even wish upon its beauty so prestige
From where I stand its look is perfection
There is no timeless wonder to this moon
You know it will come back soon
The stars that stand like soldiers
Guard its virginal pristine they honour our moon.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 6, 2010 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Sarah. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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July 5, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Congrats Sarah on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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July 5, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Congrats Sarah, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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July 5, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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July 4, 2010 at 1:05 PM
There is something very magical about the moon and you capture its mistique very well, Sara! Really like the way you described its "circular face" watching you. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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July 4, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Very descriptive and expressive write. Let the inspiration overflow onto the pages at soup..Sara
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July 4, 2010 at 9:57 AM
A lunar luxury this poem is Sarah, isn't the moon wonderful >> James
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July 4, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day
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July 4, 2010 at 7:32 AM
A wonderful write on our moon. I enjoyed it/
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July 4, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Nice with a hint of beauty added to your poem. Enjoyed your poem Sarah , and have a wonderful and safe 4th of july,..Sidney LeeAnn
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