Our Meeting

Our meeting last night Sent fire through my heart and veins Fireworks from your touch Fast succession exploded Bright colors decorated
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Devnath  Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 9:10 AM
It's a way of nice presentation of something new. Loved always, bl
Connelly Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 4:28 AM
How wonderful and romantic love it.. Thanks for stopping by Sara.. :-) Hazel
Sweetheart Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 1:06 AM
A PASSIONATE PICTURE PAINTED IN VIBRANT WORDS SARA .. LUV THE FLOW AND EMOTION .. WELL HOPE I AM BACK ON TRACK AGAIN .. STILL CANNOT VIEW MANY POETS LISTS YET BUT .. BETTER LUV ..
Onclaud Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 4:03 PM
you glow with this one, sara... lovely way to end the whole thoughts, so well decorated... a real treat for me today!...:) best wishes and huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 3:34 PM
what a sparkling romantic one!
Cayton Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 3:31 PM
sparks all by itself, very warm and sensuous. Not here much, I do the best that I can. Your friend in poetry, Lucinda
Sivey Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 10:44 AM
Wow, this is a truly wonderful and energetic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your positively delightful and sentimental poem this afternoon! What a fascinatingly pleasant piece, Great Work!!
Horsman Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 9:46 AM
really lovely is this wonderful tanka...
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 6:42 AM
Very romantic poem Sara, I love it. :) Wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Nutter Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 6:13 AM
Passion, Love all captured in this short rather erotic piece. Loved it.
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