Our Meadow In Ukraine, a Prayerful Wish

When walls crumble down
And dreams lay strewn and scattered
Remember our place
Deep in the mountain forest
Through the sharp-thorned brush
A meadow creekside
Times like this our shelter built
Roof for our gardens
Fresh flowing water nearbye
Wildflowers in Spring
Bountiful summer veggies
Fireside in Winter
I'll meet you there my true love
If God parts our path
To look once more in your eyes
Pressing your heart against mine


2/26/22
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Maverick Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Wow are they in trouble..' Doing that sort of Thing..In this sort of world..? Well the world is Still the same..' Its those damn malign Influencers..Gets me everytime.'
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:14 PM
I like where you took your poetry for Ukraine. Different and lovely.
Goff Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 3:42 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Calasibetta Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 6:12 AM
You are quite the romantic~ an ethereal vision that comes in dreams ~ hopeful of fruition. :)Paulette
Goff Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Paulette!
Roper Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Very romantic verse, James. Thoughts of what my husband use to describe when he would drive me up to the old settlements in the mountains. The old sparse , broken down sheds were still standing. A great prayer for the Ukraine people.
Goff Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Eve...
George Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 1:22 AM
"I'll meet you there my true love If God parts our path To look once more in your eyes Pressing your heart against mine"..... These lines engender such deep feelings in the heart ! Nothing is certain, especially when a war is going on. A very emotive write, dear friend James !
Goff Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Thank you Valsa!
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Very romantic and emotive work considering what is going on in that part of the world. Sad situation. Nuclear War is not what the world is wanting but we want the death and destruction to end in that part of the world. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara
Goff Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Dreams are free, reality is cruel for sure, Sara...
Proxenos Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 10:09 AM
What a beautiful write James, also a little sad for they could be parted but will reunite when the time is right . Thank your for your welcome visit and lovely comment. Blessings Jennifer
Goff Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Thanks again Jennifer!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 6:06 PM
Jim, your prayer should be in our hearts and on our lips! Beautiful. Let's pray peace is not far away. :) Paulette
Goff Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Very much! Thank you Paulette!
Lawrence Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 12:55 PM
This brought tears to my eyes and a pang in my heart dear James. I pray and wish for peace for all. Your words are lovely. Blessings, Susan :)
Goff Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Thank you Susan, you're very kind!
Sands Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 3:02 PM
I have been led to a beautiful poem. Very nice James. Special :)
Goff Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 5:51 PM
You're very kind, thank you Heidi
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