Our Meadow In Ukraine, a Prayerful Wish

When walls crumble down
And dreams lay strewn and scattered
Remember our place
Deep in the mountain forest
Through the sharp-thorned brush
A meadow creekside
Times like this our shelter built
Roof for our gardens
Fresh flowing water nearbye
Wildflowers in Spring
Bountiful summer veggies
Fireside in Winter
I'll meet you there my true love
If God parts our path
To look once more in your eyes
Pressing your heart against mine


2/26/22

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Date: 3/31/2023 7:47:00 AM
Wow are they in trouble..' Doing that sort of Thing..In this sort of world..? Well the world is Still the same..' Its those damn malign Influencers..Gets me everytime.'
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Date: 3/17/2022 11:14:00 PM
I like where you took your poetry for Ukraine. Different and lovely.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 3/18/2022 3:42:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 3/12/2022 6:12:00 AM
You are quite the romantic~ an ethereal vision that comes in dreams ~ hopeful of fruition. :)Paulette
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Date: 3/12/2022 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Paulette!
Date: 3/9/2022 6:22:00 PM
Very romantic verse, James. Thoughts of what my husband use to describe when he would drive me up to the old settlements in the mountains. The old sparse , broken down sheds were still standing. A great prayer for the Ukraine people.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 3/10/2022 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 3/8/2022 1:22:00 AM
"I'll meet you there my true love If God parts our path To look once more in your eyes Pressing your heart against mine"..... These lines engender such deep feelings in the heart ! Nothing is certain, especially when a war is going on. A very emotive write, dear friend James !
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 3/8/2022 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Valsa!
Date: 2/28/2022 2:01:00 PM
Very romantic and emotive work considering what is going on in that part of the world. Sad situation. Nuclear War is not what the world is wanting but we want the death and destruction to end in that part of the world. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2022 7:56:00 AM
Dreams are free, reality is cruel for sure, Sara...
Date: 2/28/2022 10:09:00 AM
What a beautiful write James, also a little sad for they could be parted but will reunite when the time is right . Thank your for your welcome visit and lovely comment. Blessings Jennifer
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/28/2022 10:45:00 AM
Thanks again Jennifer!
Date: 2/27/2022 6:06:00 PM
Jim, your prayer should be in our hearts and on our lips! Beautiful. Let's pray peace is not far away. :) Paulette
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/27/2022 6:32:00 PM
Very much! Thank you Paulette!
Date: 2/27/2022 12:55:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes and a pang in my heart dear James. I pray and wish for peace for all. Your words are lovely. Blessings, Susan :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/27/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Susan, you're very kind!
Date: 2/26/2022 3:02:00 PM
I have been led to a beautiful poem. Very nice James. Special :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/26/2022 5:51:00 PM
You're very kind, thank you Heidi
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