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Our Loving Thirst


our synergy burst
encapsulates she and thee
thralls our loving thirst




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Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2015 at 11:41 PM

so you don't drive?

James Fraser

April 11, 2015 at 7:55 AM

Hi Andrea, nope, this Scotsman doesn't drive :) James...

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2015 at 11:41 PM

James, the only thing ingenius about traffic school is that it voids out the traffic ticket!! haha

James Fraser

April 11, 2015 at 7:55 AM

It's still a good concept :)

Tammy Reams

April 10, 2015 at 6:53 PM

Beautiful write James! Good luck in the contest.

James Fraser

April 11, 2015 at 8:07 AM

Thank you kindly Tammy :) James :)

M. L. Kiser

April 10, 2015 at 4:52 PM

Beautifully penned...very deep.

James Fraser

April 11, 2015 at 8:17 AM

Thank you MLK, I quite like this one. Happy weekend to you, James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 9, 2015 at 11:40 PM

Great senryu James, love the rhyming of the senryu!

James Fraser

April 10, 2015 at 3:12 PM

Thought it would make it better if I threw the last line in. Thank you Upma, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2015 at 11:00 PM

Cool title, James. Love that synergy burst line.

James Fraser

April 10, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Many thanks Andrea, I quite like it :) Have a lovely weekend, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 8:05 PM

Dino James, I like the synergy burst.. :D! and the last line.. mmmmmmmn :)! warm hugs xxx//olive eloisa ;)

James Fraser

April 11, 2015 at 8:20 AM

Hiya Oliz, I quite like this short poem. I wonder where the inspiration came from, warm hugs always little one // Dino James xxxx

Jan Allison

April 9, 2015 at 4:22 PM

lovely romantic senryu James:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

April 10, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Evening Jan, hugs and smiles as always, James :) :) xx

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