White Sage Poet Free verse

Our Love's Gone Into the Blue

Simmering like a boiling water
My love's evaporated into the blue atmosphere
Where its bones have been scattered
To decay in the beautiful blue sky

Overheating has caused your heart to melt
Into the beauty of the blue, never to return
Escaping into a non transparent mirror, leashed there forever with a belt
Being blinded away from what our love's become

My beautiful butterfly's been swallowed by the blue
Loosing control on it's ride crashing into heaven's infinity
No accident report, only my face staring at the hue-
Of the atmosphere, lacking natures pity

The love we shared had shattered like glass
And the remnant was spread on the breeze, to bury it in the sky
Where free elements will do their will with its carcass
No map can lead you back home from such place that's high

My favorite blue kite has wandered into the thickness of the thin blue
Getting itself hidden forever in hot boiling dew
Being tamed, enslaved and transported by the black cloud
Only for me, after the storm's left; to discover the transparent elegant sky that's proud


Our love's gone into the blue like a stranger
Threatening our world with such danger
When love's left, then this is what's left
A face that stares at you from the blue, and hostility on it is spelt


contest:  INTO THE BLUE
sponsor: Anthony Slausen

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Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 9:53 PM White Sage, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA - White Sage January 27, 2016 at 8:28 AM thanks Linda, i appreciate your words

Teddy Kimathi January 20, 2016 at 4:01 AM Magnificent imagery you've painted into our minds White Sage!! Congrats on your placement!!!! ;-) White Sage January 20, 2016 at 2:09 PM thanks Teddy

Eve Roper January 14, 2016 at 9:46 PM White, congratulations on your win! White Sage January 15, 2016 at 5:37 AM thanks Eve

Skat A January 14, 2016 at 9:18 PM White Sage, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT ** White Sage January 15, 2016 at 5:35 AM thanks Skat, i appreciate you coming by

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2016 at 8:18 PM White sage, nice rhyming at the end, some wonderful metaphors and phrases here that am noting.. message is strong.. =`)~Olive ELoisa =`) White Sage January 15, 2016 at 5:30 AM thanks Olive

Reason A. Poteet January 14, 2016 at 8:11 PM Excellent approach to the prompt, white sage. I liked the different metaphors of the bones, the butterfly and kite describing your love. Congratulations on your win. White Sage January 15, 2016 at 5:28 AM thanks so much, i appreciate your comment

Sandra Haight January 14, 2016 at 7:43 PM Congratulations on your fine win, White Sage! Lovely imagery in your poem. Hugs, Sandra White Sage January 15, 2016 at 5:25 AM thanks Sandra...

Beautiful Scars January 14, 2016 at 7:04 PM White Sage, many congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles* White Sage January 15, 2016 at 5:24 AM thanks Laura

Beautiful Scars January 13, 2016 at 3:46 PM a wonderful entry for the contest white sage, you will do well :) *smiles* White Sage January 13, 2016 at 4:22 PM thanks Laura

Laura Breidenthal January 13, 2016 at 2:59 AM "No accident report, only my face staring at the hue- Of the atmosphere, lacking natures pity"...wow...there are many intriguing lines throughout...this makes for a very deep verse, full of color and imagery... the blue is almost overwhelming in its potency described, which is brilliant. That last line bites, in a good way. Great poem. Always, Laura White Sage January 13, 2016 at 7:59 AM thanks Laura, i appreciate your comment

Sara Kendrick January 11, 2016 at 3:42 PM Your work is very emotive and expressive..I hope just imagination and not love gone down the drain..Thanks for dropping by..Sara White Sage January 12, 2016 at 9:10 AM thanks Sara, it's kind of imaginative

Ravindra K Kapoor January 10, 2016 at 11:04 PM A moving poem from a wide new sky which gives us lot think and fly. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor White Sage January 11, 2016 at 2:39 AM thanks Ravindra

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2016 at 6:46 PM You really paint some very creative images, white sage. I sure could not be this inventive with the theme into the blue!!! White Sage January 11, 2016 at 2:38 AM I believe you'd do more better if you try...thanks Andrea

Skat A January 10, 2016 at 5:20 PM Amazing... I hope you take a top spot with your entry.. Love SKAT White Sage January 11, 2016 at 2:34 AM thanks Skat White Sage January 11, 2016 at 2:33 AM

Nette Onclaud January 10, 2016 at 2:14 PM heartbreaking and well rendered, WS... this is good!..huggs White Sage January 10, 2016 at 2:28 PM thanks Nette

Demetrios Trifiatis January 10, 2016 at 12:54 PM Very descriptive and very powerful! When a love is lost the heart is suffering and this it is seen here! Good luck dear WS! A seven! White Sage January 10, 2016 at 1:54 PM thanks Demetrios...when the heart hurts, even smiles are accompanied with bitter tears, thanks for coming by dear one

Legendary Legend January 10, 2016 at 9:37 AM awesome....enjoyed it. White Sage January 10, 2016 at 1:50 PM thanks LL, am glad you came by

Wilfred Aniagyei January 10, 2016 at 3:08 AM 'Into the blue like a stranger, threatening our world with such danger" - fav line Great imagery, WS!!!!! Well done White Sage January 10, 2016 at 7:21 AM thanks Wilfred, am glad you like it White Sage January 10, 2016 at 7:19 AM thanks Wilfred, am glad you like it

Kp Nunez January 10, 2016 at 1:24 AM Very creative metaphoric write! Best wishes in the contest, WS. Kim White Sage January 10, 2016 at 1:33 AM thanks Kim, am glad you came by

Francis Osho January 9, 2016 at 6:01 PM i lov it sage White Sage January 10, 2016 at 12:57 AM thanks Francis...am glad you like it

Dalia Shahein January 9, 2016 at 5:40 PM Oh sage this is so beautiful , (When love's left, then this is what's left A face that stares at you from the blue, and hostility on it is spelt ) just capturing , I'm in love with this one , i give it a 7 and a FAV , best of luck in the contest my dear with this spectacular poem , hugs / / :) dalia White Sage January 9, 2016 at 5:45 PM thanks so much dear friend, am glad you came by...I really appreciate that