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Our Love's Gone Into the Blue

Simmering like a boiling water My love's evaporated into the blue atmosphere Where its bones have been scattered To decay in the beautiful blue sky Overheating has caused your heart to melt Into the beauty of the blue, never to return Escaping into a non transparent mirror, leashed there forever with a belt Being blinded away from what our love's become My beautiful butterfly's been swallowed by the blue Loosing control on it's ride crashing into heaven's infinity No accident report, only my face staring at the hue- Of the atmosphere, lacking natures pity The love we shared had shattered like glass And the remnant was spread on the breeze, to bury it in the sky Where free elements will do their will with its carcass No map can lead you back home from such place that's high My favorite blue kite has wandered into the thickness of the thin blue Getting itself hidden forever in hot boiling dew Being tamed, enslaved and transported by the black cloud Only for me, after the storm's left; to discover the transparent elegant sky that's proud Our love's gone into the blue like a stranger Threatening our world with such danger When love's left, then this is what's left A face that stares at you from the blue, and hostility on it is spelt contest: INTO THE BLUE sponsor: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:53:00 PM
White Sage, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:28:00 AM
thanks Linda, i appreciate your words
Date: 1/20/2016 4:01:00 AM
Magnificent imagery you've painted into our minds White Sage!! Congrats on your placement!!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/20/2016 2:09:00 PM
thanks Teddy
Date: 1/14/2016 9:46:00 PM
White, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:37:00 AM
thanks Eve
Date: 1/14/2016 9:18:00 PM
White Sage, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:35:00 AM
thanks Skat, i appreciate you coming by
Date: 1/14/2016 8:18:00 PM
White sage, nice rhyming at the end, some wonderful metaphors and phrases here that am noting.. message is strong.. =`)~Olive ELoisa =`)
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White Sage
Date: 1/15/2016 5:30:00 AM
thanks Olive
Date: 1/14/2016 8:11:00 PM
Excellent approach to the prompt, white sage. I liked the different metaphors of the bones, the butterfly and kite describing your love. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:28:00 AM
thanks so much, i appreciate your comment
Date: 1/14/2016 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, White Sage! Lovely imagery in your poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/15/2016 5:25:00 AM
thanks Sandra...
Date: 1/14/2016 7:04:00 PM
White Sage, many congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles*
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White Sage
Date: 1/15/2016 5:24:00 AM
thanks Laura
Date: 1/13/2016 3:46:00 PM
a wonderful entry for the contest white sage, you will do well :) *smiles*
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Date: 1/13/2016 4:22:00 PM
thanks Laura
Date: 1/13/2016 2:59:00 AM
"No accident report, only my face staring at the hue- Of the atmosphere, lacking natures pity"...wow...there are many intriguing lines throughout...this makes for a very deep verse, full of color and imagery... the blue is almost overwhelming in its potency described, which is brilliant. That last line bites, in a good way. Great poem. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:59:00 AM
thanks Laura, i appreciate your comment
Date: 1/11/2016 3:42:00 PM
Your work is very emotive and expressive..I hope just imagination and not love gone down the drain..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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White Sage
Date: 1/12/2016 9:10:00 AM
thanks Sara, it's kind of imaginative
Date: 1/10/2016 11:04:00 PM
A moving poem from a wide new sky which gives us lot think and fly. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor
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White Sage
Date: 1/11/2016 2:39:00 AM
thanks Ravindra
Date: 1/10/2016 6:46:00 PM
You really paint some very creative images, white sage. I sure could not be this inventive with the theme into the blue!!!
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White Sage
Date: 1/11/2016 2:38:00 AM
I believe you'd do more better if you try...thanks Andrea
Date: 1/10/2016 5:20:00 PM
Amazing... I hope you take a top spot with your entry.. Love SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:34:00 AM
thanks Skat
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:33:00 AM
Date: 1/10/2016 2:14:00 PM
heartbreaking and well rendered, WS... this is good!..huggs
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Date: 1/10/2016 2:28:00 PM
thanks Nette
Date: 1/10/2016 12:54:00 PM
Very descriptive and very powerful! When a love is lost the heart is suffering and this it is seen here! Good luck dear WS! A seven!
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Date: 1/10/2016 1:54:00 PM
thanks Demetrios...when the heart hurts, even smiles are accompanied with bitter tears, thanks for coming by dear one
Date: 1/10/2016 9:37:00 AM
awesome....enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/10/2016 1:50:00 PM
thanks LL, am glad you came by
Date: 1/10/2016 3:08:00 AM
'Into the blue like a stranger, threatening our world with such danger" - fav line Great imagery, WS!!!!! Well done
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White Sage
Date: 1/10/2016 7:21:00 AM
thanks Wilfred, am glad you like it
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Date: 1/10/2016 7:19:00 AM
thanks Wilfred, am glad you like it
Date: 1/10/2016 1:24:00 AM
Very creative metaphoric write! Best wishes in the contest, WS. Kim
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Date: 1/10/2016 1:33:00 AM
thanks Kim, am glad you came by
Date: 1/9/2016 6:01:00 PM
i lov it sage
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Date: 1/10/2016 12:57:00 AM
thanks Francis...am glad you like it
Date: 1/9/2016 5:40:00 PM
Oh sage this is so beautiful , (When love's left, then this is what's left A face that stares at you from the blue, and hostility on it is spelt ) just capturing , I'm in love with this one , i give it a 7 and a FAV , best of luck in the contest my dear with this spectacular poem , hugs / / :) dalia
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White Sage
Date: 1/9/2016 5:45:00 PM
thanks so much dear friend, am glad you came by...I really appreciate that

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