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Our Love Is Destined To Grow

Terzanelle A,B,A,b,C,B,c,D,C,d,E,D,e,F,E,f,F,A,A A love that is destined to grow Each day that passes we learn more A love that is destined to grow I am intrigued, mystified by your lore I know that we will remain for eternity Each day that passes we learn more We gain introspect to our unified identity I even love the traits that I can't stand I know that we will remain for eternity Our life so far is never bland Engaged to be wed, your what I want I even love the traits that I can't stand Holding your hand, our love I will flaunt Everyday with you is a celebration Engaged to be wed, your what I want Even though in life there may be temptation Everyday with you is a celebration A love that is destined to grow Our love is destined to grow! Jared Pickett 4/12/2012

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/20/2012 10:00:00 PM

a very deeply inspiring piece for your passionate love,,,very well explored and expressed with precious thoughts and emotion,,Thank you for reading mine and for taking the time to comment as well,,,,Blessings..Cecil

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/14/2012 8:47:00 PM

Dear Jared, I choose this Masterpiece to read, because of the of the " Form " It is new to me and YOU have Inspired me to Try this Form Thank-YOU for YOUR Many Gracious Comments on my Work with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Broken Butterfly

Date: 4/14/2012 12:10:00 PM

Hi Jared, I think this poem is awesome and I would love to try this form also, thanks for your kind comments and encouragement. Keep up the great writing

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2012 9:28:00 AM

a marvelously romantic revelation Jared luv.. so happy u finally found your soul mate and love of your life my friend.. so amazing this feeling.. to grow in love every day.. luv is my favorite subject..all important to a terrific life on Planet Earth.. do luv the rhyme sequence and emotional expressions too.. happy weekend..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/13/2012 1:23:00 AM

You sound so happy in these wonderful verses..that without knowing how you transmit such happiness to the reader.. beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2012 11:57:00 PM

"Everyday with you is a celebration"......so beautifull said....This is a lovely poem Jared! - oxox love Anne-Lise