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Our Love Could Have Been An Eternity

As time shakes its evil hand toward me I know the extent and drop a sorrowful tear for thee I awaken in the future from a wonderful dream I call for one last moment with you but the fleeting sands wont deem My heart drops as I wearily look to the past Hoping the hands of the hour will make the memory last To give you and I one perpetual last chance But the grandfather clock has done its final dance As I sit and stare at fates face always unkind Forever clinging to a far hopes key rewind Learning the pain of being trapped in a moment The ticks grow louder in the reality of the present The seasons have turned and changed and I can see Knowing the age of our love could have been an eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/4/2012 2:10:00 PM
Good title for a good poem. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Kevin Clark
Date: 2/4/2012 6:16:00 PM
Thanks. Im glad you liked it.
Date: 1/25/2012 5:55:00 PM
So enjoyed this great poem Kevin. You used so many wonderful lines - clock has done its final dance - is just one of these. It also is full of regret for what could have been. Really nice one! :)
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Kevin Clark
Date: 1/25/2012 6:06:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth so nice to hear from you. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 1/22/2012 9:53:00 PM
A good descriptive write with good rhyming.
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Kevin Clark
Date: 1/23/2012 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Robert for your comments I appreciate it.
Date: 1/22/2012 10:27:00 AM
This was a good poem,it was a pleasure to take a visit to your poetry pages Kevin.oxox love Anne-Lise
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Kevin Clark
Date: 1/22/2012 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Ann for your comments.
Date: 1/21/2012 5:39:00 AM
Lovely, enjoyed your good work Kevin, Elizabeth
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Kevin Clark
Date: 1/21/2012 6:26:00 PM
Thanks Elizabeth for your comments.

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