Our Love

Our love is like a rambling vine,
It grows, it climbs, it intertwines 

Long and strong, a melodious song
Gingerly playing all daylong

Our love is like a rambling vine,
It grows, it climbs, it intertwines

Joined by God and not by man
On good soil, not sinking sand

Our love is like a rambling vine,
It grows, it climbs, it intertwines…

It will  not crack, it will not break
It will not shimmy, it will not shake

Our love is like a rambling vine,
It grows, it climbs, it intertwines

Built on faith, built on trust
Unrequited love…the two of us

Our love is like a rambling vine,
It grows, it climbs, it intertwines.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Great use of repetition. Parts have a Dr. Seuss feel. It gives it a cool vibe.
Staton Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Thank you!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:06 PM
This is a beautiful written free verse!!! Very smooth to the soul!!! I need to take notes from your perfection. :)
Lee Sr. Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:40 PM
This is so grand, so loving. Great piece James :)
Teagan Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Valerie this is so beautiful! I especially love the repeating line. I enjoyed reading this romantic poem.
Sheehan Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Wonderful love poem. Enjoyed it immensely, all the lines. Very creative.
Wanter Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Just love it...."Our love is like, ....." is a perfect allegory.
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