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Our Local Vampire

Had a blood sample taken by our local vampire Saw traces of blood on her teeth when she smiled She drew an extra flask For an afternoon snack She sure looked scary in her vampire attire © Jack Ellison 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2015 9:38:00 PM

a vampiress!! Love how you had her with a flask of it!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/3/2015 9:50:00 PM

"An afternoon snack"!!! The nursey-poo that was taking a blood sample actually said that to me!!! I pretty sure she was joking... hmmm! LOL Hugs, Jack xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/3/2015 1:02:00 PM

Ummm... Jack... I thought you said your Dr. was hubba- hubba... Did she send in a mean old nurse?... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/3/2015 1:10:00 PM

Oh she is... my dear sweet loveable Dr. KIMBERLEY Sutton!!! Yup! However, she sent me to this blood letting office down the street where I encountered this vampire! She ACTUALLY told me she was drawing an extra vile for her afternoon snack! A vampire with a sense of humour! I THINK she was kidding! xxx!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2015 8:01:00 AM

lol I hate having blood taken Jack - i call them the vampire nurses - even wrote a poem about them lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2015 8:06:00 AM

I've been fine the last 4 times - I take a chocolate with me to eat whilst the evil deed is being done - works a treat:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/3/2015 8:04:00 AM

Actually this vampire was totally amazing!!! Didn't feel a damn thing!!! Hugs, Jake xxx