Rukhsana Afridi Poet Triolet

Our Living Earth

The Earth’s core is alive and well.
Rotating like a Dervish, time flees!
Peace beckons us like sweet bees.
The Earth’s core is alive and well.
With kindness and pure love our hearts swell!
Hate condemns us to a hellish fate!
The Earth’s core is alive and well.
Rotating like a Dervish, time flees!

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Joseph P. DiMino January 5, 2026 at 5:52 AM All is well with the core of the earth...now if we could just give the surface some needed care, all would be right with the world. Thoughtful poem, Rukhsana. Makes one think deeply. No pun intended. Rukhsana Afridi January 5, 2026 at 6:31 AM Thank you so much Joe!

Faruk Ahmed Roni December 16, 2025 at 1:36 PM This poem beautifully mirrors the Earth’s vibrant energy, blending its eternal rhythm with human emotions of love and hate. THANK YOU FOR SHARING Rukhsana Afridi December 17, 2025 at 4:42 AM Thank you!