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Our Lips Meet


Being held so close,
Our lips meeting like rainbows;
Kaleidoscope Kiss.


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Lynette Chachere

July 27, 2009 at 4:23 PM

Wonderful write.~Always Lynette

Nicole Sharon Brown

July 20, 2009 at 12:02 AM

I love this one how you brought in the nostalgia of the kaleidoscope, kisses are not dark but colorful beautiful, simply beautiful!

Kakraba Afful

July 16, 2009 at 9:07 AM

Interesting! Good write J-Frase!

Carolyn Devonshire

July 15, 2009 at 8:54 PM

The fascination of the kaleidoscope makes this kiss a memorable one. Outstanding senryu, James! Love, Carolyn (Now don't forget to pick up the "haunted poets" tag.)