Our Lips Meet

Being held so close, Our lips meeting like rainbows; Kaleidoscope Kiss. http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/27/2009 4:23:00 PM

Wonderful write.~Always Lynette

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/20/2009 12:02:00 AM

I love this one how you brought in the nostalgia of the kaleidoscope, kisses are not dark but colorful beautiful, simply beautiful!

Kakraba Afful

Date: 7/16/2009 9:07:00 AM

Interesting! Good write J-Frase!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/15/2009 8:54:00 PM

The fascination of the kaleidoscope makes this kiss a memorable one. Outstanding senryu, James! Love, Carolyn (Now don't forget to pick up the "haunted poets" tag.)

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/15/2009 8:39:00 PM

This is just so colorful and passionate, love this senryu

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/15/2009 2:24:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL DESCRIPTION OF COLOURS THROUGH KISSES--GREAT James and thanks always for your kind comments--charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2009 2:13:00 PM

Very passionate Senryu. Sara

Veronica Joseph

Date: 7/15/2009 1:54:00 PM

mmmmm. inviting.