Our Life Our Choice

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We welcome thought intrusion, with ego in collusion, since awareness, self-aware each illusion does outstare. Essence of presence vibrant, negates thus, lower mind’s rant by consciousness correction, as love and light gains traction. Fulcrum of our attention is prone to oscillation unless each breath be love inked, body, mind and soul, God-linked. The choice to ride God’s bliss bus is left entirely to us; until then, what’s our excuse, to succumb to ego’s ruse? 12-July-2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2022 4:30:00 PM

"love-inked, God-linked" - brilliant!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/14/2022 1:24:00 AM

Thanks Caren! I like the Jueju poetry form

Anil Deo

Date: 7/12/2022 6:25:00 AM

THE Choice (for any faith versus hating Everyone) is exactly penned in last stanza. Choose to "ride God's bliss bus" or fight Everything alone, blind! Thx P.S. thinking of Me. McGreavy and Michelle Faulkner ... Some atheists with selfawareness are real gifts to US & the world, compared to narrow "religious nationalism " shalom shalom

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/12/2022 7:44:00 AM

Indeed. Religion addresses lower mind (although it has its use as a directional indicator) whilst Spirituality is the direct path eliminating the ‘middleman*’ (*ritual, doctrines, scriptures, beliefs and interpretations of this vs that)