Unseeking Seeker Poet Jueju

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Our Life Our Choice

We welcome thought intrusion,
with ego in collusion,
since awareness, self-aware
each illusion does outstare.

Essence of presence vibrant,
negates thus, lower mind’s rant
by consciousness correction,
as love and light gains traction.

Fulcrum of our attention
is prone to oscillation 
unless each breath be love inked,
body, mind and soul, God-linked.

The choice to ride God’s bliss bus
is left entirely to us;
until then, what’s our excuse,
to succumb to ego’s ruse?

12-July-2022

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Caren Krutsinger July 13, 2022 at 4:30 PM "love-inked, God-linked" - brilliant! Unseeking Seeker July 14, 2022 at 1:24 AM Thanks Caren! I like the Jueju poetry form

Anil Deo July 12, 2022 at 6:25 AM THE Choice (for any faith versus hating Everyone) is exactly penned in last stanza. Choose to "ride God's bliss bus" or fight Everything alone, blind! Thx P.S. thinking of Me. McGreavy and Michelle Faulkner ... Some atheists with selfawareness are real gifts to US & the world, compared to narrow "religious nationalism " shalom shalom Unseeking Seeker July 12, 2022 at 7:44 AM Indeed. Religion addresses lower mind (although it has its use as a directional indicator) whilst Spirituality is the direct path eliminating the ‘middleman*’ (*ritual, doctrines, scriptures, beliefs and interpretations of this vs that)