Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Our Kiss

The night fell all around me

sunshine washed away

 by salty drops

dripping down

onto my pillow

blurring my mind


I saw visions 

beautiful visions

Bright as day

Her light was there to guide me



cross around her neck

white flower in her hair

cascading gently downward

upon the bottom of her neck

taking my hand

we walk

barefoot in the sand

Her touch

her sweet touch

pulling me close

her soft pink lips

coming close

oh so close

pulling me in

feelings so right

Our lips touch

pure bliss

what a kiss

releasing me 


tip of her tongue

encircling mine

emotions exploding 


losing track of time

a moment,

 a lifetime

 I will never forget

setting me free

letting me be me

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Teddy Kimathi July 27, 2016 at 2:37 AM Congrats Tim, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Sonia Walker July 26, 2016 at 9:25 AM Tim, congratulations on making the win. There must be romance in the air.

Charlie Smith July 25, 2016 at 11:24 AM Now that's one for the memory banks...Congratulations Tim

Kai Michael Neumann July 25, 2016 at 1:22 AM Congratulations. I like this. Well done

Just James July 25, 2016 at 12:59 AM Wonderful write congratulations

Richard Lamoureux July 24, 2016 at 7:43 PM Now that's a kiss! Congrats on the kiss and the win!

Skat A July 24, 2016 at 6:23 PM Awesome win Tim....skat

Royal Ninja July 24, 2016 at 5:55 PM Nice Tim. Thank you. Royal

Ty Townsend December 26, 2014 at 1:09 AM A simple kiss from lips of that special someone is always a moment so divine. You captured the beauty of it in your poem.

Ninette Carey December 9, 2014 at 8:25 AM May Life Bring to You Those Lips! Tim! Beautifully Written!! <3 Tim Smith December 9, 2014 at 9:24 AM Thank you Nina...I hope so too....hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter November 29, 2014 at 1:04 PM Wow Tim! That's a very romantic poem you've written here to put it mild. Very beautiful! I enjoyed it! A 7 from me! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. Tim Smith November 29, 2014 at 1:06 PM Thank you Dorian my good friend...hugs Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 29, 2014 at 8:07 AM Subtly romantic Tim! Longings everlast n time makes that happen! Fantastic write! Tim Smith November 29, 2014 at 12:02 PM Thank you Upma my dear friend.... Hugs Tim

Paul Callus November 29, 2014 at 7:26 AM Beautiful and romantic ... a special kiss between two people lost in deep attraction. Hope this is inspired by a new love that leads from the past to the future! // paul Tim Smith November 29, 2014 at 12:01 PM Yes Paul a special kiss inspired by love

Demetrios Trifiatis November 29, 2014 at 1:37 AM Precious and blissful moments like that illumine the road of one's life and help him go through the dark hours that may come! A kiss as this is the exclamation point of the heart. May all your life offer you such moments my dear friend, Tim. Wonderfully romantic, incomparably beautiful! Tim Smith November 29, 2014 at 11:59 AM Thank you Demetrios my dear friend.

Eileen Manassian November 28, 2014 at 11:11 PM Wow, Tim...that must have been some kiss. There is a song that goes..."If you wanna know if he (she) loves you so...it's in her kiss! ;) Good one, my good friend. Tim Smith November 29, 2014 at 11:58 AM It is a kiss worth remembering Eileen... A lot can be told through a kiss...hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2014 at 10:59 PM Like Mystic so eloquently said: these words are like a string of pearls!! Tim Smith November 29, 2014 at 11:56 AM Thank you very much Andrea...hugs Tim

Faith Carmichael November 28, 2014 at 5:54 PM This is wonderful! Beautifully written Tim Smith November 28, 2014 at 5:56 PM Thank you Faith...hugs Tim

Nette Onclaud November 28, 2014 at 5:31 PM I deeply enjoyed the fluid stream of your affectionate thoughts, tim... the theme of love prevails; well done.. huggs Tim Smith November 28, 2014 at 5:33 PM Thank you nette...huggs

Charmaine Chircop November 28, 2014 at 5:25 PM : ) I' m flavouring and favo(u)ring this beauty.Extremely Romantic!Outstandingly B!eautiful.... Im glad those salt drops are gone.. I love the happy ending Its all about the Kiss-WoW!!!YSB Tim Smith November 28, 2014 at 5:30 PM I like that flavor... Thank you Charma. :.) ND

Jan Allison November 28, 2014 at 5:19 PM wow:-) hugs jan x Tim Smith November 28, 2014 at 5:22 PM Thanks Jan.....hugs Tim