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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BRj9jUpKhRI Gliding down the river of dreams we take to the ore watching the last of the sunlight descend o'er the lake Peaceful wings soar above our heads and we smile as we shimmy through the waves with an easy sway gliding down the river of hope alongside the drake Striding the waters slow as can be we keep pace with the swans as they slip through the stream like white winged angels and velvet black swans portenting the change through a sky made of lace we are the gliders, wandering for loves own sake Grappling with life, plucking our courage we slip into the meld of the water, we amalgamate shoring our Faith upstream we navigate as we shimmy through the waves with easy sway gliding down the river of hope, alongside the drake we journey....5/10/2020

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Date: 5/12/2020 3:21:00 PM
A lovely journey Pixie, excellent penning!
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Date: 5/12/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thanks for the visits.
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Date: 5/11/2020 1:05:00 PM
You captured innocence with this lovely write.
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Date: 5/11/2020 9:14:00 AM
This "journey" allows us to add more details ... & your last 4 lines "slip" & "meld" in the "shoring our Faith." There's a special character for each waterfowl ... swans have the commanding calmness. These webbed siblings glide easily - yet under water webbed feet may be working as oars or propellers. ThanX Pixie, shalom
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Date: 5/11/2020 8:30:00 AM
What a beautiful journey my friend! Superb poetry.
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Date: 5/11/2020 7:18:00 AM
Great write. Kind wishes, Kai
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