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Our Journey


Our Journey


So nonchalant, we strolled upon our trail,
   together in our rendezvous with life,
not knowing what our journey would entail
   to reach our goals...precarious, or rife.

Our gallivanting led to places grand, 
   and with finesse, we blended our unique
ways to combine our special pathways planned...
   still heading to our marriage mountain peak.

How long our trail, that seems like yesterday
   we started, hand in hand, to walk our miles;
meet goals, yet acquiesce that, come what may,
   with ecstasy or sadness, firm our smiles.

And now, six decades later, we are blessed...
   still on our path...we travel to the crest.
  

Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: Your Best Sonnet 2018
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 07/08/2018

Required words used for the previous contest in order of appearance:
    nonchalant  rendezvous  precarious  gallivanting
    finesse  unique  acquiesce  ecstasy
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Roper Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, for all your visits and supportive comments. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 9:47 PM
Oh to enjoy a long life of love is the most beautiful thing imaginable and you, my dear Sandra, are doing it with such beauty and poetic grace. A gorgeous sonnet from your lovely heart. Congratulations on your sixty years of wedded bliss and for your wonderful win as well! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Thank you so very much, dear Susan, for your always so supportive and uplifting comments on my poems, and also for the anniversary congrats...yes, we are blessed. Sorry to get back to you so late, but I always appreciate your visits and encouraging words. Love and Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Ah! A sonnet that ends happily, triumphantly --- instead of tragically. Just love it, Sandra. Congrats on your win. Best always, Gershon
Haight Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Thank you very much, Gerson, for your visit and lovely supportive comments and congrats! Sandra
Nance Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:13 AM
This bring a smile to my face, how beautiful everlasting love is. This is so awesome. many hugs and congrats
Haight Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Thank you so much, Casarah. I appreciate your uplifting and supportive comments so much. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Congratulations on your win and on your 60 years! Beautiful.
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Thank you, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Congrats Sandra on a beautiful sonnet, more importantly 60 years married, wow you must be around my moms age!
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Thank you, John. I'm pleased to be on your winner's list, Yes, I was 18, close to 19 when we married. Sandra
Justice Ndubuisi Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Wow! This is a good read. Life journey is full of surprises. We don't know what each turn will bring. Nice one dear.
Sands Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:41 PM
What a beautiful writing and so well done with the words required. :)
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi, for your supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 12:25 PM
I love how you know you are blessed, you appreciate your blessings and it shows in your creativity to frequently, spiritually touch me. You are both beautiful in your wedding photo, a beauty time cannot fade or see otherwise made. A glowing and inspirational tribute to love, your love and your life. I adore this poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Dear CayCay, thank you so much for your lovely, uplifting comment about my poem and your very heartfelt and supportive words about our marriage journey. I appreciate your visit and moving thoughts so much. Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Wow Sandra 60 years, that's one amazing journey, I wish you both every happiness in your continuing journey. Good luck. Tom.
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, for your visit, lovely comment and anniversary best wishes. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
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