Our Hot Soup

when its cold be bold
any races or faces
don't let it go to wastes
its has the tastes
fill with noodle loots
OUR
HOP SOUP
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 9, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Serve it up without delay. It keeps us warm on a cold day. I have a spoon. Put it in a bowl. I will sit right down and eat it whole. It's for the individual and the group. Let's all have some HOT SOUP.
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