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We saved up all our money and finally said, “I do”, looking forward to our marital bliss and honeymoon in Hawaii. I wondered what it would be like to walk hand and hand along the shore with my new husband. We would be on an island oasis sleeping in a tiny hut with palm trees floating above us like drifting clouds. We arrived and all we could see was blue waters and sandy beaches. We knew we would have the trip of a lifetime from the moment we stepped off the plane. Lays were gently placed around our necks and I could smell the florals of hibiscus plants. Nothing could stop our love from blooming into moments of romance and joy. perfect honeymoon Hawaii destination- island oasis The first day we shared passion along pebbled beach. Alone in our own haven sleeping under the clear twilit stars. True love was ahead of us and we knew the life we had started would become our greatest gift indeed. How could God create such a beautiful sanctuary on earth? The second day we swam with the dolphins along Waikiki shores. My dolphin’s name was Jenny and man, was she gorgeous! She had the most beautiful hazel eyes and longest tipped nose. She blew water through her hole and it splashed in my face. I felt refreshed and calm at the same time. passion on the shore God’s beautiful creation- Waikiki heaven The next few days we went to a luau and drank Mai-tais with another couple we met on their honeymoon also. We laughed so hard we cried and enjoyed each other’s company. We ate meals under the moon as the clear night sky shined above us. We went out on a yacht and went scuba diving for fun. I enjoyed it much better than I ever thought I would. The angel fish swept up against my legs and I took pictures with a waterproof camera of the rainbow-colored coral. When we were about to leave a sadness flowed over me. I didn’t want to leave such a stunning location where we shared our once and a lifetime trip. Our honeymoon was perfect and I can only hope one day we can travel back to Hawaii and enjoy that romance we shared back in 2002. God bless our vacation and God bless our love. so much laughter shared Angelfish and coral hope- trip of a lifetime August 1, 2017

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Date: 9/3/2017 11:45:00 AM
what a beautiful romantic setting to start your married life together Luloo:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2017 7:41:00 AM
Hi Laura. Congrats for your placement with this enchanting, breathtaking piece!! The accompanying photo too is equally magical! ;-)
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Date: 8/26/2017 4:58:00 PM
Laura congrad's on your verse & your wonderful trip & husband! I hope to read more of your verses soon! Light & Love
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Date: 8/25/2017 4:41:00 PM
Great trip, nice Haibun, Laura, enjoyed reading your write congratulations on your win : ) ~*
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Date: 8/25/2017 3:37:00 PM
Blessings of a paradisiacal island! Lovely write, Luloo! Congrats!
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