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Our Great Hope

Our Great Hope (An Easter Poem) As sun arose bright morning crept. Night's darkness fled, though few had slept. Tears fell from eyes, left wispy trails, as night rang out with sobs and wails. The soldiers feared. Stone rolled away. They must explain. The void archway. Great doom and fear filled cold, dark hearts. Concerns grew fierce, in fits and starts. The ladies came to change His clothes. The body’s gone. Their footsteps froze. He wasn’t there. Where did He go? He kept His word. He told them so. An angel came and asked them why, they looked on Earth and not the sky. “He’s risen now. He is not dead. Christ is alive, just like He said.”

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Date: 4/7/2024 12:39:00 PM
A great poem on the Easter theme. I love the four syllable style, concise and powerful. Best wishes. Tony.
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 4/7/2024 8:00:00 PM
Hi Tony. Thank you for your complimentary words. I created this style several years ago and call it CUBE16. It has 4 syllables per line; 4 lines per stanza, 4 stanzas per cube16 and the cube16s can be stacked. Rhyme scheme is abcb. Thank you. Z
Date: 4/6/2024 10:09:00 PM
I'm somewhat surprised this poem hasn't had more comments. The construction of the poem, the rhyming and cadence especially get a very big thumbs up from me. Cheers - Gary
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 4/7/2024 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Gary. I appreciate your kind words about the piece. Thank you for the thumbs up. Zim
Date: 3/29/2024 5:50:00 PM
Awesome write many blessings Happy Easter season.
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 3/29/2024 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Yolanda. I appreciate your good words and I wish you a blessed Easter. Z

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